Springtime Once Again - Lacharta Style

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~Springtime Once Again~ (LaCharta) The days are turning rather hot It's spring, but you'd think that we'd got Summer, because it is so hot. It's so warm need find a cool spot Rather like weather when is cool What want now is jump in the pool Springtime is so lovely indeed When rains more cool weather we need It's a nice time to plant more seeds Also time to kill more those bad weeds Beautiful roses we see grow Spring is when nature seems to glow Hear many birds sing from the trees Mother duck with her chicks now just see Children play and just laugh with glee Many games to play on land, sea. Enjoy spring, 'cause her days go fast Spring sadly, for too long won't last. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 December.02.2015 ~Author's Notes: "The LaCharta" is a poetry style created by Laura Lamarca.

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Gary Bateman

Date: 12/2/2015 8:08:00 AM

Hello Dearest One "D" . . . Methinks this LaCharta style poem is quite excellent for sure. The "Word Picture" you paint with "Springtime Once Again" is even further embellished by very beautiful picture images that you've posted in the "Notes Section." A radiant and uplifting poem for sure, which gives us all something to grasp onto and to look forward to as dredge ourselves through the "Cold" of this Winter!! Perfect balance and symmetry with your verses too!! "SEVEN" + "BIG FAV" Cheers, "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/6/2015 8:34:00 PM

Hi there G!Thank you ever so kindly my dear friend Gary,for stopping by again and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I'm so glad you liked this piece of mine here.I truly appreciate so much, your very kind visit,the 7, the fav, and of course the very wonderful comments that you always honor me with.You're always so kind to me,G.I'm glad that you like the images that I chose for this one also.Methinks that this style is awesome too:))Well, G, I hope that all is well on your side with you and Ingrid and that your book is coming along perfectly well as you envisioned it so far.Sending my love and prayers to you and Ingrid as always!Take very good care of each other now! :))Thanks again for everything, G!Best to you always!And keep the ink flowing! Wishing you a very lovely week ahead!In His light!God bless you!:)D.