Springtime In the Snow

Springtime in the Snow You sent this melody this magical river that ripples endlessly on the keys of my heart; spellbound and lost in time drifting through the air on the open sea with you I sail. Your song is all aglow suspended soft and bright a moment of delight springtime in the snow embracing in its wake fireflies that wake and fill up my nights with flashing lights. The moon the sun in harmony dancing gently a golden silver thread spin in my head and suddenly a universe in me immersed unfolds its chords and in my heart soars. (At 1:30 in the music the melody and the lyrics start over) I set these lines to Yiruma's melody "Kiss the Rain". Please, click the YouTube video above and enjoy :)

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Date: 7/8/2017 5:58:00 PM
I came back to read this again, Still as fresh as the first time. I used to listen to a radio station called Smooth Jazz, that had this kind of music. Keeny G. They canceled it. Said not enough people listen. Going to favs if I didn't the first time :)
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 7/10/2017 5:02:00 PM
Thanks for your wonderful words Debbie. I used to listen to that station at times; it's too bad it has disappeared.
Date: 5/3/2017 8:36:00 AM
makes me think of spiritual love - the deepest love of them all - some say...
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 5/3/2017 3:35:00 PM
Your wonderful comments warm my heart Verlecia. Sometimes, music can take us to a 'higher plane', and that's how I feel with many of Yiruma's compositions:)
Date: 4/21/2017 1:03:00 PM
Beautiful, with or without the music.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/21/2017 5:51:00 PM
Thank you so much James for this very kind review:)
Date: 4/12/2017 4:57:00 PM
Love this music, Love the poem.I wrote one called Fireflies. But way different subject :)
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/14/2017 3:31:00 PM
I'm glad you liked the two combined. I just read 'Fireflies', that was indeed way different, but my goodness Debbie what a strong write that was:)
Date: 4/12/2017 8:18:00 AM
wow, beautiful written. Thanks so much for sharing
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/14/2017 3:19:00 PM
You're quite welcome. I just hope I did justice to Yiruma's music because he is amazing.
Date: 4/7/2017 7:30:00 AM
Your imagery is quite exquisite Anne- Marie:-) I would love to hear your lyrics actually set to music:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 4/7/2017 8:48:00 PM
Jan, I am so happy you liked it but my lyrics are actually set to Yiruma's incredible piano piece I posted: "kiss the rain". Without Yiruma's music, this poem would be nonexistent. He is my inspiration :)
Date: 3/30/2017 11:37:00 AM
Anne-Marie, springtime in the snow can compete with poems of famous classical poets like Tennyson, TS Elliot, Pope, Milton, Blake etc. Have you ever won an award or a pullitzer prize? You are competent enough to do so.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/30/2017 12:56:00 PM
Joseph, thank you a million times for this incredible comment, but seriously, I couldn't hold a candle to these giants. If it touched your heart or your soul, if it brought a little bit of light into your life, then that is my pulitzer prize:)
Date: 3/25/2017 3:49:00 PM
Anne-Marie Your wonder words flow accompanied by the orchestra of the universe. 7 my best to you, chuck
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/26/2017 4:56:00 PM
Thank you Chuck for your kind words and the rating. They are both greatly appreciated.:)
Date: 3/17/2017 1:20:00 PM
The imagery in this poem is amazing.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/17/2017 7:04:00 PM
I first posted the lyrics in French on a French poetry site . . . and then some brand new lyrics came to me in English, so here I am:)
Date: 3/16/2017 4:14:00 AM
...and...this nice and sweet music...reflecting Love!! ^^ ^^ ^^ Rita.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/16/2017 5:59:00 AM
Be careful, Yiruma is addictive. I almost made my daughter crazy playing his songs over and over again. My excuse was, of course, that I was working on the lyrics:)
Date: 3/16/2017 4:12:00 AM
I have travelled from my seat, just by reading this poem. Thanks ever so, Anne-Marie!! Blessings from France, Rita.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/16/2017 5:57:00 AM
Your words fill me with joy Rita because poetry to me is music that travels and unites all of us: Yiruma, you, me, we are living under the same flag, a flag that knows no bound, no country:) Très amicalement
Date: 3/15/2017 9:15:00 AM
Beautiful image - so creative
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/15/2017 10:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria, I'm glad you liked it:)
Date: 3/14/2017 9:41:00 AM
Good Morning Anne-Marie. Welcome to PoetrySoup. I joined last month so I'm fairly new also. I hope you enjoy it here. Everyone is marvelous and so very talented. It has been an honor for me to be here. Your entry before us is stunning. Everything about it is poetic including the title. I can image this in a song. It was well executed in language and in formatting. Well done
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/14/2017 7:41:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind welcoming words Lisa. English is a second language for me so I was hesitant about posting poetry on this site, but it feels great being part of a community like this.
Date: 3/14/2017 8:59:00 AM
So lovely!
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/14/2017 7:35:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it Kim:)
Date: 3/12/2017 7:51:00 AM
There is a way to embed your YouTube video's, if you like to know how, SoupMail me and I will explain, too few lines here to do that :) I love your poem a lot. Wonderful imagery there. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Anne-Marie Coreggia
Date: 3/14/2017 7:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Darren. I went back and figured out how to embed the video . . . but, silly me, I entered this reply in the comment box and I would like to know how I could possibly erase it:)
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