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Springtime As The Gardener

Spring, his time for leafy prayers from Winter's share of heaven's rinse on Earth— his maiden ice jolted by the sun, his prance comes in dew drops and seed drops, a gauze on forests and grass blades as sweet blooms by his tender motions spread all 'round.

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Date: 10/26/2024 1:36:00 AM
A very belated congrats here. I keep clicking on your poems and can't find one yet that I have not read. Thanks for all your lovely comments, Paige
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Date: 3/12/2024 4:18:00 AM
Creative lines penned in this one about spring. It seems as if a miracle lies before our eyes when it comes. Thanks for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 3/11/2024 7:11:00 PM
Paige, an awe-inspiring composition celebrating the onset of spring and its role in setting the stage for a beautiful and vibrant garden on earth.
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Date: 3/8/2024 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner in Tania's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 3/3/2024 12:57:00 PM
Paige, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!
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Date: 2/23/2024 11:38:00 AM
Love the analogy of a spring to a pioneer, with gauze on forests. Wonderful image, Paige. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings.
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Date: 2/22/2024 9:00:00 PM
beautifully conveyed here - the word choice and overall execution are fantastic
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Date: 2/22/2024 6:29:00 PM
I like this Paige. I likeksd his prance comes in dew drops and his time for leafy prayers is stummimhg, My friend. Stay in touch, Paige, Pangie xx Pangie
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Date: 2/22/2024 6:19:00 PM
Love: jolted by the sun, his time for leafy prayers!
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Date: 2/22/2024 1:44:00 PM
Really nice imagery used, Paige.
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Date: 2/22/2024 10:18:00 AM
Stupendous poem on early spring. A preparation for a lovely earthly garden.
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