Springtime

Springtime Waves crashing against docks Flowers blooming by the rocks Animals starting to wake The Great Bear with a backache Springtime Spring will come, all in good time Springtime Is here to stay Springtime Mother Nature has to decide Whether to stay or hide

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/10/2016 4:59:00 PM

A beautifully penned piece about nature.... Congrats Jared, for having your piece featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!! ;-)

Abdiel Rios

Date: 6/10/2016 1:25:00 PM

Good imagery

Moon Flower

Date: 4/17/2016 8:40:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Jared. :)

Lu Loo

Date: 4/12/2016 1:59:00 PM

Jared a beautiful free verse about springtime..perfect for this time of year, except I got snow this week and now its 60 degrees! :)-luloo

Elliot Sutton
Date: 4/27/2016 10:59:00 AM

Tell me about it smith

Jared Smith
Date: 4/13/2016 11:23:00 AM

Too bad about the snow. I live in Michigan and we have had cold weather the past two weeks.