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Springtime paints such a delightful scene Cute lambs gambol in the fields so green Warm winds whisper through the leafy trees Blossoms float down on a swirling breeze Daffodils daintily dance and shake their heads Bringing bright yellow sunshine to our flowerbeds 3rd February 2015

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Date: 5/22/2021 5:38:00 AM
Spring is exalted and this beautiful poem Jan. You have captured all the beauty of new growth and color. Congratulations on your first placement. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:52:00 AM
Nice, bright and lively poem
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Date: 2/19/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Gwen:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/12/2015 12:06:00 PM
THAT'S perfect spring poem Jan and Spring is the perfect season. I'm glad you stopped by to admire my WRITE. I look forward to reading more of yours in the future.
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Date: 2/13/2015 4:45:00 AM
Thanks Valerie:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/5/2015 9:44:00 PM
this is a cute and SPRINGY poem. I feel a spring in my step just reading it. Soupmail.
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Date: 2/6/2015 2:57:00 AM
Thanks Andrea I do appreciate your comments:-) hugs jan x
Date: 2/5/2015 2:43:00 PM
Oh how I look forward to spring's return. To see my tulips and paper whites in full bloom and to await with anticipation, my wonderous roses. Thanks for the imagery.
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Date: 2/5/2015 4:44:00 PM
Thanks for the comment ML:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/4/2015 4:37:00 PM
The sight of Daffodils is such a lovely scene, it's like a doorway to Spring. Along the River Side here, every so many meters there are pockets of Daffodils. Love this short piece Jan, hugs, James xx
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Date: 2/4/2015 4:44:00 PM
I saw my first spring lamb yesterday - luckily it was in the field and not on my plate:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
Date: 2/4/2015 10:57:00 AM
Way to sum it up!!! Great write, splendid imagery! :) well done!!!!
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Date: 2/4/2015 11:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Grace :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/4/2015 8:53:00 AM
Oh Jan. beautiful springtime feels...makes me want to sing and do some twirls...I know, it doesn't exactly rhyme, but I love your piece, so i'll have to make do with this...Smiles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim
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Date: 2/4/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim it is so lovely to see the sun and the gardens starting to bring colour into our world:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/4/2015 6:45:00 AM
A divine breeze of beauty, dear Jan, masterfully painted!
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Date: 2/4/2015 8:37:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment Demetrios:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/4/2015 6:14:00 AM
this is lovely, jan! a perfect counterpoint to the snow and slush outside my window!
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Date: 2/4/2015 8:37:00 AM
I loved your recent winter poem Ilene :-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 2/4/2015 4:59:00 AM
Amazing imagery. :)
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Date: 2/4/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Lei - Spring is on its way on our little Island:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/4/2015 3:17:00 AM
What a beauty Jan,, so well depicted,, wonderful pics,, amazing work!
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Date: 2/4/2015 3:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr Sharma Spring is well and truly on its way here on our little Island:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/3/2015 10:43:00 PM
Excellent.Lovely imagery. Great spring poem. Enjoyed reading it,Tfs
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Date: 2/4/2015 2:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Ravi:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 2/3/2015 5:48:00 PM
delightful spring poem Jan hugs 7
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:50:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment and the great rating Shadow:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/3/2015 5:31:00 PM
I feel the warm wind and it fills my heart with color . . . spring love, 7, nicely done dear Jan
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thanks so much David - I hope you never change your avatar i LOVE that poem oh so much:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/3/2015 4:58:00 PM
What lovely images in this poem, Jan. Our town park is abloom with daffodils in spring, along with crocoses, snowflakes, and tulips. Sorry, no lambs, however. Thanks for the stop by. / M
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Date: 2/3/2015 5:15:00 PM
It is a wonderful time of the year Maurice - that said I appreciate all the changes each season brings us:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 2/3/2015 3:11:00 PM
this is beautiful, Jan
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Date: 2/3/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Jack - Spring is on its way on our little Island:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/3/2015 3:02:00 PM
Excellent imagery...this would make a lovely painting, Jan! I notice that many are those who are already dying for spring to arrive! Hope you're coping well with the cold weather. hugs // paul
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Date: 2/3/2015 3:07:00 PM
Minus 1 when i drove to work Paul - thank goodness for thermals lol - but spring is on its way:-) Hugs Jan x... am waiting on the head's decision re time off - wings crossed:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/3/2015 1:53:00 PM
A lovely tribute to spring Jan. I especially like the use of alliteration it always seems to go so well when used to describe flowers. However judging by the temperature outside your door though it may be a little premiture. Another 7 and into favs. love Shane xxx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/3/2015 2:29:00 PM
Any help I can give you just say and its yours. love shane xxx
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:25:00 PM
Still with us :-) ... I am finding it hard going at the moment ... just need time to get my head sorted:-( hugs Jan xx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/3/2015 2:14:00 PM
And Summer is starting to draw to a close over here. the cycle does seem to put continuity into ones life. Your father? love Shane xxx
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Date: 2/3/2015 2:09:00 PM
Yes it was minus 1 when I drove to work this morning but i saw my first lamb and the spring bulbs are starting to raise their heads:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 2/3/2015 1:41:00 PM
Such a very sweet and happy poem, Jan!
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Date: 2/3/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by Laura:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 2/3/2015 1:20:00 PM
Very nice jan,I like it. Tonytoca
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Date: 2/3/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Tony:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/3/2015 1:19:00 PM
Hey Jan, a great tribute to springtime. With you help I am feeling the sun and the breeze - thanks for sharing this. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 2/3/2015 1:22:00 PM
I saw my first spring lamb today:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/3/2015 1:18:00 PM
a time to revive life.. spring time... beautifully painted Jan... hugs, nad!
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/3/2015 1:22:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

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