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Springtime

The watch repair: nearly all done All parts reassembled, save one A spring in the air Brought groans of despair When time flies, it's not all that fun! —————
For the “Spring In Air” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Mohan Chutani Written 02/16/2022

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Date: 2/17/2022 1:24:00 PM
Darling limerick.
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Date: 2/16/2022 5:14:00 PM
A very uniquely different take on the contest theme. Nicely done
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/16/2022 5:21:00 PM
Thanks, John. "skewed perspective" might be another way to describe my takes, sometimes. take care, -jeff
Date: 2/16/2022 12:46:00 PM
Yikes…lol! Where does time go! It springs ahead…
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/16/2022 1:10:00 PM
I guess in 6 months I can do one on old people, walkers, and fall hazards... That might be a bit close to home though, lol. Have a blessed day!
Date: 2/16/2022 11:56:00 AM
Hello Jeff Kyser, yes this is different. About the Spring. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/18/2022 4:07:00 PM
Hello Jeff, you are welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/16/2022 12:31:00 PM
And you as well!
Date: 2/16/2022 11:02:00 AM
I enjoyed this different 'take' on the theme of spring, the poem's great rhythmic flow and the sense of fun. Well done,Jeff.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 2/16/2022 11:11:00 AM
Thanks! As they say, Spring has sprung!

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