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Springtime

Countrysides calling, dull and dreary towns. Tides of joy hitting, poor men's simple huts, bringing spring of growth. Sunny, funny Lively weather Sowing seeds of Peace and pleasure. Scents of sprouts Sunshine show Rainbow sky Lovely Reborn Spring.
Second Place in BRIAN'S CHOICE S,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand Honorable Mention in Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Date: 5/23/2020 5:41:00 PM
Dropping by to congratulate you again on your beautiful entry and on your placement Jenish. Keep writing and inspiring. God bless you :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/24/2020 12:07:00 AM
That is so sweet of you..Thank you..
Date: 5/23/2020 11:30:00 AM
Congrats Jenish on a well written poem. Sunny, funny Lively weather Sowing seeds of Peace and pleasure. I like the way Words toss and turn and flow here!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/24/2020 12:06:00 AM
Thank you Krish..Positive comments from poets like you are inspiration to write more..
Date: 5/15/2020 9:22:00 PM
as lovely as can be, Jenish!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 11:55:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Date: 5/15/2020 6:00:00 PM
Wow Jenish, this brought chills! The beauty of spring is exalted in your beautiful poem. The form is a difficult one for me. Best luck in the contest! xxoo
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/15/2020 11:54:00 PM
Thank you Connie..Your words brought a spring in my mind..
Date: 5/14/2020 6:50:00 PM
Sowing seeds of peace and rebirth. A lovely poem that is full of hope for the future. Thank you Jenish ...
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Shirley..Your inspirational poem works and I think my muse came back for a while..Stay safe..
Date: 5/14/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thank you for the rainbows and the words, well done Jenish
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:40:00 PM
Thank you Pixie for your kind support..
Date: 5/14/2020 2:38:00 PM
Wow. Your second stanza fairly sings the beauty of Spring. Great contest entry! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 5/14/2020 1:01:00 PM
Im lucky that I live in the countryside and see spring at its best, well written verse Jenish. Tom
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Date: 5/14/2020 11:48:00 AM
This is such a refreshing imagery. Wish you all the best! :)
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Aditi..
Date: 5/14/2020 11:21:00 AM
simply divine in praise of spring's wonder, jen!...huggs and soup mail!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:35:00 AM
Thank you nette..
Date: 5/14/2020 11:03:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Jenish...courting imagery of spring. All the best.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/14/2020 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Vijay for your kind support..

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