Jenish Somadas Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Springtime

Countrysides calling,
dull and dreary towns.
Tides of joy hitting,
poor men's simple huts,
bringing spring of growth.

Sunny, funny
Lively weather
Sowing seeds of
Peace and pleasure.

Scents of sprouts
Sunshine show
Rainbow sky

Lovely
Reborn

Spring.


Second Place in BRIAN'S CHOICE S,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

Honorable Mention in Diminished Hexaverse Poetry Contest sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Aditi Mishra May 23, 2020 at 5:41 PM Dropping by to congratulate you again on your beautiful entry and on your placement Jenish. Keep writing and inspiring. God bless you :) Jenish Somadas May 24, 2020 at 12:07 AM That is so sweet of you..Thank you..

Krish Radhakrishna May 23, 2020 at 11:30 AM Congrats Jenish on a well written poem. Sunny, funny Lively weather Sowing seeds of Peace and pleasure. I like the way Words toss and turn and flow here! Jenish Somadas May 24, 2020 at 12:06 AM Thank you Krish..Positive comments from poets like you are inspiration to write more..

Andrea Dietrich May 15, 2020 at 9:22 PM as lovely as can be, Jenish! Jenish Somadas May 15, 2020 at 11:55 PM Thank you Andrea..

Connie Marcum Wong May 15, 2020 at 6:00 PM Wow Jenish, this brought chills! The beauty of spring is exalted in your beautiful poem. The form is a difficult one for me. Best luck in the contest! xxoo Jenish Somadas May 15, 2020 at 11:54 PM Thank you Connie..Your words brought a spring in my mind..

Shirley Hawkins May 14, 2020 at 6:50 PM Sowing seeds of peace and rebirth. A lovely poem that is full of hope for the future. Thank you Jenish ... Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 11:43 PM Thank you Shirley..Your inspirational poem works and I think my muse came back for a while..Stay safe..

Mystic Rose Rose May 14, 2020 at 2:53 PM Thank you for the rainbows and the words, well done Jenish Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 11:40 PM Thank you Pixie for your kind support..

Gershon Wolf May 14, 2020 at 2:38 PM Wow. Your second stanza fairly sings the beauty of Spring. Great contest entry! Cheers, Gershon

Tom Cunningham May 14, 2020 at 1:01 PM Im lucky that I live in the countryside and see spring at its best, well written verse Jenish. Tom

Aditi Mishra May 14, 2020 at 11:48 AM This is such a refreshing imagery. Wish you all the best! :) Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 12:37 PM Thank you Aditi..

Nette Onclaud May 14, 2020 at 11:21 AM simply divine in praise of spring's wonder, jen!...huggs and soup mail! Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 11:35 AM Thank you nette..

Vijay Pandit May 14, 2020 at 11:03 AM Beautiful poem, Jenish...courting imagery of spring. All the best. Jenish Somadas May 14, 2020 at 11:34 AM Thank you Vijay for your kind support..