Spring's Return

Beneath cobalt skies,
An armada of petals:
Praise the blinding sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gorelick Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 7:48 PM
Hey you..any chance of you coming back soon? We miss you...BG
George   Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Beautiful Haiku as only you can write, dear Raul. Miss you my friend and your wonderful poetry. Love, Lainie
La France Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 7:29 PM
Where are you Raul, miss your haiku contests and miss you~~~ Constance
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July 11, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Dear Haiku Sensei, Raul, Another great Haiku Hope all is Well with YOU and YOURS YOU haven't written anything for a couple of weeks My Prayers ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
Sweetheart Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 4:51 PM
Just stopping by to say "hi" Raul and that u are missed on Soup.. miss your contests of Haiku and hope u are enjoying your hiatus .. am in vacation in Hawaii too but leaving tomorrow for home .. hope u will return soon.. with luv..
Rich Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 3:44 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.
Boy Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 12:37 PM
kool write on spring B.boy
Harrison Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:00 AM
What a beautiful image you filled my head with Raul!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 7:21 PM
An armada of petals...a great description Raul.. appreciate your 10th place for my entry in your Tupac contest..I have been away on vacation since June 20th at the seashore and now am in Hawaii until July 4th... so just a quick "hello" and looking forward to your new contests... keeping in touch till I return.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
Goff Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 7:35 PM
gorgeous haiku! Raul! jimbo
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June 27, 2010 at 12:08 PM
enjoyed reading today, Are you ok? Have not heard from you lately.
Goff Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 1:53 AM
screams spring! well done! Raul! jimbo
Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Great descriptive write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Yes, I believe the plants sing praises...Sara
Brown Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 11:11 AM
There are so many amazing poems written and posted everyday here at PoetrySoup. The poets here grow with each poem they write. It is a pleasure to read them and I am so happy yours is among them today Raul. Love, Carol
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June 24, 2010 at 1:51 AM
Glad you're posting again. .lovely . .Celene.
Byrne Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 6:28 PM
like this one!
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:44 PM
It has been quite a time since you posted. Apt images for Spring's return
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June 23, 2010 at 5:42 PM
Love tht second line in this delightful haiku, Raul. And it's great to see you posting again. Great work! Love, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Lovely lovely, Raul!! I've missed your haiku poems !!! (I just realized I had neglected to thank you for the placement in your last contest...so appreciated the honor!...such a intense and gifted person as the subject to inspire!)
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