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Spring's Mourning

Anticipating the rebirth of nature 
onto the fields, I walked the other day
hoping to marvel at the outburst of beauty.  

On my way, 
unexpectedly, Spring I met herself just passing by
very surprised I was indeed
when
to my dismay, I noticed that her sparkling 
vitality had gone. She looked like an old maid! 

No longer was she beauty's incarnation-
her face was grim, the light in her eyes dim
and her lips tight were because of much pain
thus just sadness, desolation, and melancholy 
remained.

Saddened
by Spring's deplorable appearance,
cautiously I approached her and as
politely as I could, asked in this way:

"Oh ethereal spring
whose beauty is admired by the Gods and
by all mortals alike
may I ask you why in this condition
do I you find?


Spring
in desperation looked at me and after 
pausing for a while, these words managed 
to utter with a sigh:

"I am mourning the death of my mortal friends
who so anxiously have been waiting for my coming 
but 
now that I am here they, unfortunately, cannot
witness my blooming!"

Thus replied Spring and paused for a moment. 

It was then
that I detected on her lips a faint smile as 
her eyes turned towards the sky, 
whispering these words at the same time: 

 " Rest in peace, my beloved friends, 
for although you have missed my arrival, 
I promise to each of you a flower to grow, 
a flower, to keep you company 
in 
the eternal spring of paradise!"     










© Demetrios Trifiatis
     30 March 2020



*Dedicated to all our brothers and sisters who have lost the battle 
against COVID-19 and to all those who are still fighting this horrible disease! 

WITH GOD'S HELP, WE SHALL PREVAIL!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 3/30/2020 10:41:00 PM
Absolutely Captivating So very meaningful, I understand, my father died ( not this disease) awaiting Spring on March 11, many years ago but I remember
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/31/2020 7:18:00 AM
Donna, my friend, thank you for your gracious comment! Sorry for your father! I lost mine when I was a child! Blessings!
Date: 3/30/2020 10:04:00 PM
As always I am amazed at the eloquence and beauty of your words. Loved this. God Bless, JB
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/31/2020 7:16:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words dear Judy! Blessings!
Date: 3/30/2020 2:36:00 PM
- Beautifully written ... but terribly sad, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2020 2:58:00 PM
My dearest Anne-Lise, reality is sad especially now. Would you like me to write something joyful that doesn't represent reality? Just to be likeable? I don't think so. Thank you . For your information this poem I posted on Messenger as well and from USA a publisher asked me to give my permission to include it in an Anthology dealing with coronavirus. I gave my permission. Thank you. Hugsxxx
Date: 3/30/2020 10:29:00 AM
Your words outshine in this beautiful personification poem.. Spring mourning all the lost souls that didn't make it to see her beautiful dress of many colors. I hope there is an end to this crisis.
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Date: 3/30/2020 7:26:00 PM
Congratulations and it is pretty awesome, Demetrios. I always feel honored when one ask to do the same. We are a family united under the heavens, and Soup home. :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2020 3:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment dearest Eve. The good news is that a publisher in USA asked my permission to include it in an Anthology that is dedicated to coronavirus. Unfortunately PS doesn't seem to appreciate it much apart from you loving friends here that support me with your visits and comments. Hugs xxx
Date: 3/30/2020 9:29:00 AM
Wonderful way you expressed the sad feelings..Yes, suddenly the earth looked desolate and dead..when will death stops her wealthy harvest?
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2020 9:57:00 AM
Jenish, my dear friend, thank you for gracious visit and lovely comment. God bless you. Hugs xxx
Date: 3/30/2020 8:46:00 AM
So sad that many will no longer enjoy God's creation, no sign of a let up yet Demetrios, although it seems to be slowing on places Tom
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2020 8:54:00 AM
Yes, it slows down in China and goes up in USA , England , Germany, Spain. We still at the beginning. India has not started yet. Thank you for visiting my friend.
Date: 3/30/2020 8:25:00 AM
I am touched by this beautiful poem, Demi. A most appropriate dedication to all victims of coronavirus. It is a time for hope, faith and prayer. Have a nice day! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/30/2020 8:46:00 AM
I appreciate your comment my dear friend , Paul. Thank you for sharing my feelings . We all subject to the same predicament. Let us be careful and take care of ourselves and of each other. God bless you .
Date: 3/30/2020 7:13:00 AM
Spring has arrived but they are not here to enjoy it's beauty--I join you in your dedication to those who passed away. Such gentle beauty to your saddened verse, Demetrios!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2020 7:52:00 AM
Thank you for caring my good friend, Vijay. God bless you. Keep safe.
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