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" SPRING'S BEAUTY " MY PHOTO ©

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Anticipating the rebirth of nature onto the fields, I walked the other day hoping to marvel at the outburst of beauty. On my way, unexpectedly, Spring I met herself just passing by very surprised I was indeed when to my dismay, I noticed that her sparkling vitality had gone. She looked like an old maid! No longer was she beauty's incarnation- her face was grim, the light in her eyes dim and her lips tight were because of much pain thus just sadness, desolation, and melancholy remained. Saddened by Spring's deplorable appearance, cautiously I approached her and as politely as I could, asked in this way: "Oh ethereal spring whose beauty is admired by the Gods and by all mortals alike may I ask you why in this condition do I you find? Spring in desperation looked at me and after pausing for a while, these words managed to utter with a sigh: "I am mourning the death of my mortal friends who so anxiously have been waiting for my coming but now that I am here they, unfortunately, cannot witness my blooming!" Thus replied Spring and paused for a moment. It was then that I detected on her lips a faint smile as her eyes turned towards the sky, whispering these words at the same time: " Rest in peace, my beloved friends, for although you have missed my arrival, I promise to each of you a flower to grow, a flower, to keep you company in the eternal spring of paradise!" © Demetrios Trifiatis 30 March 2020 *Dedicated to all our brothers and sisters who have lost the battle against COVID-19 and to all those who are still fighting this horrible disease! WITH GOD'S HELP, WE SHALL PREVAIL!

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Date: 3/30/2020 10:41:00 PM
Absolutely Captivating So very meaningful, I understand, my father died ( not this disease) awaiting Spring on March 11, many years ago but I remember
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/31/2020 7:18:00 AM
Donna, my friend, thank you for your gracious comment! Sorry for your father! I lost mine when I was a child! Blessings!
Date: 3/30/2020 10:04:00 PM
As always I am amazed at the eloquence and beauty of your words. Loved this. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/31/2020 7:16:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words dear Judy! Blessings!
Date: 3/30/2020 2:36:00 PM
- Beautifully written ... but terribly sad, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2020 2:58:00 PM
My dearest Anne-Lise, reality is sad especially now. Would you like me to write something joyful that doesn't represent reality? Just to be likeable? I don't think so. Thank you . For your information this poem I posted on Messenger as well and from USA a publisher asked me to give my permission to include it in an Anthology dealing with coronavirus. I gave my permission. Thank you. Hugsxxx
Date: 3/30/2020 10:29:00 AM
Your words outshine in this beautiful personification poem.. Spring mourning all the lost souls that didn't make it to see her beautiful dress of many colors. I hope there is an end to this crisis.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/30/2020 7:26:00 PM
Congratulations and it is pretty awesome, Demetrios. I always feel honored when one ask to do the same. We are a family united under the heavens, and Soup home. :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2020 3:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment dearest Eve. The good news is that a publisher in USA asked my permission to include it in an Anthology that is dedicated to coronavirus. Unfortunately PS doesn't seem to appreciate it much apart from you loving friends here that support me with your visits and comments. Hugs xxx
Date: 3/30/2020 9:29:00 AM
Wonderful way you expressed the sad feelings..Yes, suddenly the earth looked desolate and dead..when will death stops her wealthy harvest?
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2020 9:57:00 AM
Jenish, my dear friend, thank you for gracious visit and lovely comment. God bless you. Hugs xxx
Date: 3/30/2020 8:46:00 AM
So sad that many will no longer enjoy God's creation, no sign of a let up yet Demetrios, although it seems to be slowing on places Tom
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/30/2020 8:54:00 AM
Yes, it slows down in China and goes up in USA , England , Germany, Spain. We still at the beginning. India has not started yet. Thank you for visiting my friend.
Date: 3/30/2020 8:25:00 AM
I am touched by this beautiful poem, Demi. A most appropriate dedication to all victims of coronavirus. It is a time for hope, faith and prayer. Have a nice day! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 3/30/2020 8:46:00 AM
I appreciate your comment my dear friend , Paul. Thank you for sharing my feelings . We all subject to the same predicament. Let us be careful and take care of ourselves and of each other. God bless you .
Date: 3/30/2020 7:13:00 AM
Spring has arrived but they are not here to enjoy it's beauty--I join you in your dedication to those who passed away. Such gentle beauty to your saddened verse, Demetrios!
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Date: 3/30/2020 7:52:00 AM
Thank you for caring my good friend, Vijay. God bless you. Keep safe.

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