Spring's First Touch With Joanna Daniel

When Spring’s first touch is gently set with Winter now scarcely a threat, implore the ocean breezes spray all cares and troubles far away. With sweet caress of warmer days and softness in the sunny haze, carry me to pastoral thoughts of my favorite nature spots. Where flowers kiss the breeze that blows and young ones run, too spry to pose, transport me to refreshing moods, where nature's calm, no one intrudes. Such peace brushes my soul out here! I lie still as Tender Hands steer my notions to emotions pleased and comfort me, turmoils are eased.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Peck Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 6:14 PM
What a lovely collaboration! I didn't get that she really wanted a collab.
Fowler Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Thanks Ann. Check out her new collab contest. Should be another fun one! :)
Canerdy Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 6:55 AM
Ladies, this is a beautiful piece--vividly descriptive, engendering a smile! Janice
Fowler Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Hello Janice. Thank you for smiling at this cute one! :)
George Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 9:03 PM
So beautifully written ! A lovely spring poem and an excellent Collaboration .... ! Congratulations to you Linda and also to Joanna!
Fowler Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 6:30 AM
Thank you Valsa. I think Jo's additional lines really finished it well! :)
Y. Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Wow! Linda, You penned such a lovely Spring write(my favorite season of the year). Jo's verses made your well-written write even lovelier. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Alexis. Yes, it only became lovelier with Jo's contribution. :)
Turner Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Looks like I was right:) Congratulations on your winning poem, Alice. Soft indeed!
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 8:48 AM
You are way too good to me Daniel. I blush. Thank you! Yours is awesomeness. :)
Daniel Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:24 AM
How could I not place this perfect beauty, Linda? awesome writing, congratulations:)
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 7:41 AM
You are kind Jo. Thank you for the placement and for the perfect and pleasing addition!
Ayantika Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Lovely poem Linda! Congratulations:)
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Many thanks Akanksha!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 7:35 PM
That Winter threat is gone but it is still cold here the last couple of days!
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Big temperature drops here too Kim. Hoping it stabilizes soon :)
Rose  Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 4:18 PM
you surely took me to a beautiful warm place, can't wait for the sequel dear Linda
Fowler Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 7:39 AM
Hi sweet Vie. Your words are comforting to me. Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Lovely and wonderful post for spring!
Fowler Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 2:49 PM
Why thank you Andrea!
Chuuk Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 11:01 AM
Oh so lovely. I like it a lot. All the best in the contest. :)
Fowler Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 2:48 PM
Thank you Fin. It is nice to see you today. :)
Andresen Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 10:23 AM
- ... lovely and soft in an early spring, Linda :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise Hugs! :)
Sangster - K Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Simply beautiful Linda! Reads like a winner to me :-)
Fowler Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 7:33 AM
Hello sweet Anne. Thank you for your kind, supportive words. :)
Volumes Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Lovely one for Jo to carry on with Linda. Well done Good luck.
Fowler Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 7:32 AM
Hey Wen! I like collaborations. If they are set properly, they can go forever. :) Alexis Y. had a PEE YEW Collaboration (in 2020) of limericks that was hilarious!
May Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 7:01 PM
Lovely write Linda, best wishes in the contest
Fowler Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 7:25 AM
Hi Joseph. Thanks you for your comments and wishes. :)
Turner Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 2:16 PM
This poem has a softness to it too, Alice. A good one. Good luck sweet lady:)
Fowler Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 2:47 PM
A gentle good day to you dear Daniel. Thank you for your continued support and flattering words. :)
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