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Springs Almost Here - the Huitain Style

~Spring Is  Almost Here~
(Huitain)


One more time spring is almost here
Such a nice season to enjoy
When weather gets warmer and fair
Children play outside with their toy.

Not a lot of cold to annoy
Brand new green leaves grow in each tree
The sights of spring gives lots of joy
Birds, butterflies, flowers we see.



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2011


February.22.2017



“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 


~Author's  Notes:

The  "Huitain" is  a  French  poetry form or style.

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Lisa Ricci Date: 2/23/2017 5:15:00 AM Hello once again Dorian. You're welcome. You and your entry deserve such a grade. If you have a moment at your convenience how did you know I rated this a seven (I did) but how did you know. Not that I pay attention or worry about rankings when it comes to my work because I just write to write but where do I find this or how do I find this for my entries. This way I can properly thank anyone who gives a high grade. Thank you Dorian Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/23/2017 11:02:00 AM Hello back to you Lisa :) to answer your question is when I opened my editing box to fix a little something in my poem, that I found out you rated it. You're more than welcome Lisa an thanks so much again for your very kind visit, rating and all, you're very sweet, and I do hope that my answer really have helped you. Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light God bless you!:) D.

Lisa Ricci Date: 2/22/2017 4:54:00 PM The entry is lovely and wonderful poetry. I am strictly talking of your words and poem and not the attached images. Thank you for sharing spring and hope. Well done. Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 2/22/2017 5:58:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly Lisa, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciated the 7 and all:))You're very kind.Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you!:) D