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Springing Guise

Upward rise, Daily highs. Skyward eyes, Season's ties. Crowded skies, Southern cries, Northward flies. Mated prize, Winter dies.

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/17/2018 11:03:00 PM

Springing guise to bring surprise Congrats.

Michael Vacek
Date: 3/21/2018 12:13:00 PM

Thank you Anisha, just trying to keep it real and simple.

Lisa Costigan

Date: 3/16/2018 8:51:00 PM

Winter dies u tell lies i like apples u eat pies...I wear knickers u wear thongs i bet u like girlie songs Im a poet dont i know it if that dont rhyme go suck mine.....Just saying

Michael Vacek
Date: 3/21/2018 12:12:00 PM

You've got me pegged except for the girlie songs...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2018 1:03:00 AM

Wonderful! Great title you gave it too.

Michael Vacek
Date: 3/15/2018 9:46:00 PM

thank you Andrea. The poems for my contest have been fasntasstic. there will be some really tough decisions.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/9/2018 8:31:00 AM

Lovely! You draw us up to the heavens!

Michael Vacek
Date: 3/9/2018 2:17:00 PM

Thank you Kim...I have avowed to not shovel again before summer. After getting 20 inches dumped on us over the past two weeks, I can't bear to to look up and wonder why.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/8/2018 1:14:00 PM

Amen! Love it :) xomo

Michael Vacek
Date: 3/8/2018 1:44:00 PM

Thanks Mo'...Been way too long.

Juli- Michelle

Date: 3/8/2018 11:20:00 AM

I just love the simple rhymes here. Beautiful. Love, Juli-Michelle

Michael Vacek
Date: 3/8/2018 11:48:00 AM

I admire the simplicity I see in others' works. Poetry Soup inspires me to challenge myself. Often my poems are raging or gushing torrents of swirling words. There is something beautiful about a dabbling brook,

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/8/2018 10:32:00 AM

flows the tides of monorhyme! Love it... Mick

Michael Vacek
Date: 3/8/2018 11:51:00 AM

Thank you Mick. The flow is what I was working toward. Monorhymes are tough to write without a feeling of randomness or predictability. I wrestled with this one quite a bit until I found the rhyme that could carry it through.