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Springing and Sprinting Through Life

Each year Dad won the five-mile race Proud I was of my Senior Olympics star Always a spring in his step I followed him; he was my North Star It was during the Great Depression That Dad first learned to spring back Working on FDR’s CCC program* Finances produced no panic attack He sprang into action with fervor Determined to feed his clan Working by day, taking classes at night Dad was a remarkable man Even at 93, he managed to sprint like a teen Winning the five-mile race for the last time And he certainly kept that spring in his step Well past a normal life’s prime His stroke came suddenly New Year’s Day And our family gathered ‘round Knowing he’d not see another spring Because eternal life he’d found I like to think he bounds through heaven Still preparing for a race But feeling the comfort that can only be found Surrounded by God’s grace Entry for Carol Brown’s “Spring” contest * The Civilian Conservation Corps (CCC) was formed by FDR to provide work for jobless Americans.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/5/2012 8:25:00 AM
Superior write, dear Carolyn. Imagine winning the five-mile race at 93. It's wonderful to have such warm feelings about one's father. Hope you are doing O.K. Love, daver
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Date: 1/30/2012 9:17:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on a lovely win for these lovely words...
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Date: 1/30/2012 5:17:00 PM
Awesome tribute to Dad, Carolyn. Well written, well deserved win. Enjoyed. Thanks for your comments. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn. This is an excellent write and a real tribute to your Dad. A spring with a different step, and sure a very special one! I'm sure you will be reunited once again. That's the great hope of every Christian. Love & God bless, Maureen
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Date: 1/30/2012 2:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your great write :) Jon
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Date: 1/30/2012 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in my "Spring" contest Carolyn. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2012 9:49:00 AM
I've commented on the writes you have made done before on your Dad Carolyn, and i understand more from where you get your inner strength Carolyn...!
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Date: 1/28/2012 1:51:00 PM
Your dad was quite a guy. Lovely tribute to him, my friend
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Date: 1/28/2012 1:51:00 AM
Dear Carolyn, I so glad my poem gave you some comfort. I have put you on my prayer list. God's will always prevails, but he is always there to carry us through. Love & God bless, Maureen
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Date: 1/27/2012 4:14:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2012 3:55:00 PM
About a month ago I watched a documentary on FDR's CCC program, it was a great idea and, though rough as it was, it helped so many families, not only financially but emotionally as well Carolyn ! Great entry love ! I miss hearing from you my dear friend, I pray all's well betwix you and I dear poet. Have a blessed weekend my friend....much love, james
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Date: 1/27/2012 3:53:00 PM
I love the way you used this way of spring for Carol's "Spring" contest! This poem was a pleasure to read, it was easy flowing and moved with ease! I'm sorry you lost your father that winter but that's the way life is...we are born to die, but in the middle we are given the chance for everlasting life...that is the key I believe! I really enjoyed your poem Carolyn! Thank you for sharing it with us all! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/27/2012 3:41:00 PM
Enjoyed a snipet from your family's life..The generation before us had some more strenght and stamina..Good luck in Carol's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Love is great when it is for a lifetime..Sara
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Date: 1/27/2012 3:38:00 PM
Terrific tribute to your father Carolyn. I am sure he looks down on his daughter proud as a man can be.
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