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Spring View

Breeze blows at the summit The valley floor a green blanket Pink orchards patch work

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John Freeman

Date: 3/30/2010 8:57:00 AM

Beautifu, beautiful, view of nature's finest picture of the Agape's potential to work beauty Barbara. Congratulations in Brian's awesome contest. Agape, Moses

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/28/2010 12:45:00 AM

Blinking eye then widening to see the grandeur beauty of this nature. Congratulations on your Honorable Mention, Barbara. (^_^) Noel

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/27/2010 8:02:00 PM

Congrats for the win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2010 4:19:00 PM

Oh,my, this really paints a stunning picture, Barbara. Congratulations. I just love pink on green. LUv,Andrea

Andrew Crisci

Date: 3/26/2010 9:54:00 AM

Congrtaulations on your well-deserved win, Barbara! I love the scenery of a beautiful landscape....wonderfully told with lively imagery. Enjoy your glory. Love, hugs and admiration, Andrew.

Date: 3/25/2010 2:01:00 PM

PS--Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Saw the contest posting after I made my comment below. Karen

Date: 3/25/2010 12:59:00 PM

Beautiful use of imagery for an uplifting view. You captured spring quite nicely in this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/25/2010 9:10:00 AM

Congrats BH on your HM in Brian's contest..an excellent Haiku so brilliant in your descriptions and colors so vivid..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Mitch White

Date: 3/25/2010 3:53:00 AM

Nice picture- as I do live among Almond orchards Congrats Barbara

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/25/2010 2:26:00 AM

BG, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 3/25/2010 1:55:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Bg.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/18/2010 1:35:00 PM

And I bet it is just beautiful, Barbara! Big smiles, Dane Ann

Brian Strand

Date: 3/18/2010 1:10:00 AM

Thank you for supprting my contest BG.Rgds Brian & congrats on your recent contest success

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/17/2010 4:55:00 PM

What a lovely view BG.. hope it arrives here very soon.. enjoyed your lovely Haiku words tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/17/2010 4:28:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Barbara. Like the image of orchards forming a "patch work" blanket in the valley. Nicely done! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/17/2010 2:11:00 PM

I can definitely see this one..Keep the creative pen flowing. SK