Kim Rodrigues Poet Quatrain

Spring Thats Kinder

SPRING THAT’S KINDER

Still the pines droop after the thrust of wind and snow.
In candy cane bend, their backs whipped into shape.
Mid-March does not relieve the swoon of pinery flow.
No bouncing back from a Winter’s tale without escape.

Vibrant green of moss, uncovered, with no reminder.
Piles of Autumn leaves, forge a blanket of seasonal lies.
Quiescent oaks await the nesting of Spring that’s kinder.
And I sit upon a swing that ponders how time flies.

3/16/2018

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Gregory Richard Barden March 23, 2018 at 7:51 PM Congratulations on your win, Kim - keep up the great work! :-) <3 Kim Rodrigues March 23, 2018 at 9:15 PM Thanks so much, Greg!

Subimal Sinha-Roy March 21, 2018 at 12:33 AM Congratulations, Kim on your well-deserved win. Kim Rodrigues March 23, 2018 at 9:06 PM Thank you, my friend!

Gary Smith March 19, 2018 at 11:14 AM Congrats Kim, much enjoyed :) Kim Rodrigues March 19, 2018 at 11:18 AM Thank you, Gary!

Line Gauthier March 19, 2018 at 10:20 AM Back with congrats, Kim. Well done. Kim Rodrigues March 19, 2018 at 11:05 AM Thank you, Line! xx

Janice Canerdy March 19, 2018 at 8:59 AM Congrats on your win, Kim. LOVE that last line especially! Janice Kim Rodrigues March 19, 2018 at 11:05 AM Thank you, Janice!

Mike Gentile March 19, 2018 at 8:17 AM I love this one, Kim! Beautiful and thoughtful and I really enjoyed reading it, happy Monday xxoo Kim Rodrigues March 19, 2018 at 11:05 AM Happy Monday! Thanks, Mike!

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2018 at 10:26 AM This is wonderful, Kim, and that last line really says it all!! For me it's very true! Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2018 at 2:41 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Silent One March 17, 2018 at 6:30 AM Some great lines in your poem Kim, I am sure it will be here soon.. Kim Rodrigues March 17, 2018 at 6:33 AM Thank you, Silent! :)

Mick Talbot March 16, 2018 at 9:24 PM Aw, that was a joy to read! I think were all waiting on a 'Spring that's kinder', nice one Kim... Mick Kim Rodrigues March 16, 2018 at 9:25 PM Thank you, Mick!

Line Gauthier March 16, 2018 at 7:52 PM Delightful poem, Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 16, 2018 at 7:54 PM Thank you, Line!