Spring Tears

my tears seem senseless to you who sleeps upon stone these showers in spring under a warm, wistful sky yield soft rose buds with the thorns Written 5/14/22 for A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Contest

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/26/2022 10:15:00 AM

such a gentle contrast; exquisitely penned Rhonda.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2022 10:48:00 AM

gorgeous imagery, .Rhonda. Alway loved your style.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/24/2022 10:52:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. :) Rhonda xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/15/2022 12:13:00 PM

Like dew, tears are highlights inviting inspection. Enjoyed! Aloha!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/15/2022 4:21:00 PM

Yes. tears should be inspected. I'm a sensitive soul which can be a blessing and a curse. Thanks for your visits, Rico. Rhonda xx

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/15/2022 11:56:00 AM

I feel your tender heart as you share this dear Rhonda, its been a long time, so good to hear from you, I pray you have been keeping well and safe, xo

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/15/2022 4:16:00 PM

Thank you, Vie, for the visit and prayer. Life has its ups and downs, but I'm hoping that I'm on an upswing. I hope you are well, too. Rhonda xx

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/15/2022 8:01:00 AM

Nice one indeed!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/15/2022 4:12:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon!