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Spring Tango

The soft, gentle breeze,
Dances with the fresh new leaves;
First ballad of Spring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/29/2009 10:24:00 AM
A true ballad it is, nice images.
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:21:00 AM
Amazing imagery raul, nice wrok............Danielle
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Date: 3/25/2009 2:09:00 AM
The tango of the breeze and leaves. Nice imagery.
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:47:00 PM
A lovely ballad it is to watch the leaves dance. Bravo on this one.
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Date: 3/23/2009 11:03:00 PM
Very creative, concise and rich in description. Tyler
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Date: 3/15/2009 1:28:00 AM
Excellent Raul..one for my favourites..rhyme and image..great L3 Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/14/2009 12:21:00 AM
Dear Raul, aut oh! Is this in Carol's contest there goes my chances Superb Write Easy flow GOOD LUCK YOUR Haiku Protege...HG
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Date: 3/13/2009 3:38:00 PM
Beautiful Haiku, Raul! Such lovely imagery. It is still pretty cold here. Thank you for this lovely taste of spring! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/13/2009 12:01:00 PM
I want to dance in the breeze under the warm spring sun while the trees fill with new life and the birds sing of Peace, Love and Light! Such a wonderful piece. Vivid imagery! Have a great day! Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/13/2009 5:39:00 AM
Still waiting. In the 20's here this morning. Your poem warms me. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/12/2009 6:12:00 PM
How very sweet, it makes me happy.
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Date: 3/12/2009 4:38:00 PM
YAY!!! I love that gentle sound. beautiful, love, Kristin
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Date: 3/12/2009 2:32:00 PM
Nice way to think about Spring, a great ballad. DN
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