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Spring Tango

The soft, gentle breeze,
Dances with the fresh new leaves;
First ballad of Spring.

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Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 10:24 AM

A true ballad it is, nice images.

Danielle Moreno

March 25, 2009 at 2:21 AM

Amazing imagery raul, nice wrok............Danielle

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 2:09 AM

The tango of the breeze and leaves. Nice imagery.

Elizabeth Neal

March 24, 2009 at 7:47 PM

A lovely ballad it is to watch the leaves dance. Bravo on this one.

Tyler Martin

March 23, 2009 at 11:03 PM

Very creative, concise and rich in description. Tyler

Brian Strand

March 15, 2009 at 1:28 AM

Excellent Raul..one for my favourites..rhyme and image..great L3 Rgds Brian

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

March 14, 2009 at 12:21 AM

Dear Raul, aut oh! Is this in Carol's contest there goes my chances Superb Write Easy flow GOOD LUCK YOUR Haiku Protege...HG

Robin L. Gass

March 13, 2009 at 3:38 PM

Beautiful Haiku, Raul! Such lovely imagery. It is still pretty cold here. Thank you for this lovely taste of spring! Love, Robin

Lena Townsend

March 13, 2009 at 12:01 PM

I want to dance in the breeze under the warm spring sun while the trees fill with new life and the birds sing of Peace, Love and Light! Such a wonderful piece. Vivid imagery! Have a great day! Smiles from Lolita