Kp Nunez Poet Limerick

Spring Surprise

There once was a girl named Bo
Her dad did not like her beau 
So one day they eloped
But Bo’s dad dashed their hope
He sprang from behind with bolo.









*bolo - noun, a large, heavy, single-edged knife or machete for hacking, used in the   Philippines and by the U.S. Army

CONTEST : SPRING FORWARD - 10th Place
SPONSOR : DEBBIE GUZZI
05 March 2015

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Nandita Das May 8, 2015 at 1:16 AM Lol...made me laugh...A good one. #7.

Jan Allison March 10, 2015 at 2:45 PM Great humour Kim congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2015 at 2:23 PM oh I do remember this cute one. Congrats to you, Kim Kp Nunez March 10, 2015 at 10:22 PM Thank you Andie! To you and Sammy too!

Richard Lamoureux March 7, 2015 at 4:11 PM Thanks for reading my "Tell Me " Poem. I have now finished writing it. Kp Nunez March 8, 2015 at 8:45 AM Hi Bro Ricky, thanks for the notification. Sorry, just got back, it's Sunday, so was out the whole day. Will read it now.

William J. Jr. Atfield March 6, 2015 at 4:59 PM Another gem my Dear, - but what a way to go !!! letting his little girl know, he was still in control. - Dad slicing up the sweet dreams of a future . Kp Nunez March 6, 2015 at 5:32 PM Ah, he would have, given the chance...but the lovers sprang in opposite direction...regrouped at the edge of the village...and finally eloped. Poor grandpa had no choice but to accept the beau! lol...But that bit of info I can no longer add to the verse...Thank you sire, for the visit and comment... Hugs and smiles! :)

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2015 at 8:37 AM This is fun, good luck in Debbie's contest. Kp Nunez March 6, 2015 at 5:26 PM Thank you Richard, for the visit and support for the contest. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2015 at 7:07 AM - Great one, Kim !!! - This gave me a smile :)), and that's what limerick should .... - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kp Nunez March 6, 2015 at 7:10 AM Thanks Anne-Lise. Appreciate your visit and comments. Wish you the same, my dear! HUg you back! :D Kim

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2015 at 11:40 PM YIKES with a bolo. Glad you gave the definition of that word. It really makes the ending come alive!!

Cherl Dunn March 5, 2015 at 6:05 PM Dear Kim A very interesting write here my friend nice verse and content, good luck in the contest, and thanks for your comment on the poems also, you have a great night, cheri

Sara Kendrick March 5, 2015 at 9:06 AM Creative choice to use in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus March 5, 2015 at 8:39 AM Love your humour, Kim! I'll have to look up that Bolo...sounds like it could cause some real damage! All the best. // paul

Charmaine Chircop March 5, 2015 at 7:29 AM Hope He didnt use that Bolo and rhey made it to be together..An excellent post.

Jack Ellison March 5, 2015 at 7:20 AM Either way... love your limericks! Are you the wife of a military man? Big smackers, Jack xxx

Fadi Mathew March 5, 2015 at 6:59 AM I hope they managed to elope! :) Beautiful one my friend .. I enjoyed it.. Wish you the best of luck in the contest!