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Spring Sprung

SPRING SPRUNG first buds sprung from doldrums this motionless hurry giant bird after all these winters has found its way. cat sense and so quiet at the open window fluttering things dropping from bare branches spring sprung all in ruin silently wait first buds .

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Elaine George

Date: 5/1/2013 1:04:00 PM

You have a very special way with word,s Dave. You paint a vivid picture. Elaine

Kathryn Collins

Date: 4/30/2013 7:27:00 AM

Dear Daver, spring has sprung the grass is riz I wonder where the flowers is. by Henry Gibson You last line is a poet's dream. xxx's ooo's

Gail Debole

Date: 4/29/2013 12:28:00 PM

Hello Daver - Like all of your descriptive phrases painting your picture of spring! Indicates a great sense of patience as to what will come next. Thank you for stopping by to read my poem. - Gail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2013 8:37:00 PM

wow, I loved the phrase motionless hurry!! and also I really dug the last one, spring sprung from it all!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2013 11:30:00 AM

- Pretty "Spring Sprung" poems, Daver. - Spring is beautiful! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 4/28/2013 9:36:00 AM

Dave, so wonderful and delightful, yesterday on a walk I noticed buds on trees, I stood there in awe, realizing soon they would be wearing their emerald gowns, loved your Spring poem and your great layout, constance