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March 20, 2024

Poem of the day on March 22, 2024
Placed 2nd: Spring Sonata Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jcb Brul


 

Spring Sonata

Take me there, where the daffodils dance,
Preening with joy, flaunting nature’s art,
Where birds have assembled to watch
Sitting atop, prancing from tips of treetops,
Tuning lyrics of cherry blossom prompts,
Strumming rhythms of spring sonata
As crimson tulips, with lilies purple waltz,
To music of willows breezing with dawn
When sun breaks through haze of clouds;

Traversing over the mountains and valleys,
Over green prairies, burbling tributaries,
Besides garden of multicolored pansies,
Amid bell-shaped bluebells, red hyacinth,
Frolicking on meadows of wild blue Iris,
Rejoicing pink blossoms of magnolia trees,
Glistening verdant knolls, lush foothills.

Take me there, where rivers meet oceans, 
Merging the passions of fiery emotions
Riding with tides of romantic notions
Vying allure of love, emblazoning now;
Love that sustained in summer storms,
Love that survived through wintry wrath,
Love our souls extol, in spring’s warmth;

When I decipher your esoteric response
Where verses tender stem from my heart,
As day retreats humming nightingale’s song,
And eve’s dreams blush on magenta arc;
Take me there, my dear, where you are,
On the apex of love, on cusp of romance.
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Delaney Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 5:55 AM
Belated Congratulations on your POTD, Vijay: I love how you have captured the essence of spring with your lovely imagery of beautiful colorful flowers and meadows. Truly a lovely write. SuZ
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Very expressive, descriptive and romantic are the lines of this one. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Poet Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 12:23 PM
Your Spring Sonata is a creation that showcases the unique talent of The Word Wizard. The choice of adjectives at the beginning, such as Frolicking, and Rejoicing, effectively captures the essence of the magnolia trees, meadows, and foothills. The way you depict the progression of Spring, leading to a powerful love and romance, is truly cool. I admire the way you skillfully paint a vivid picture through your imagery and eloquent expression, a journey of pain and longing with genuine honesty.
Roper Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 1:08 AM
Wonderful poem full of color, imagery, and feelings. Congratulations on POTD.
Romios Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 11:49 PM
Congratulations to have received the honor of the POTD. Masterpiece! ~Panagiota~
Buehler Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 9:24 PM
Vijay, your spring sonata is absolutely divine, and a fave for me! Congratulations on POTD.
Tor Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 4:08 PM
Vijay wow!! Your Spring Sonata is a creation that only The Word Wizard can manifest. The beginning adjectives you used Frolicking, Rejoicing, Strumming, were perfect for describing the magnolia trees, meadows, and foothills. The relationship you build through Spring culminating and reflecting on the apex of love, on cusp of romance, is to admire your writing abilities to convey heartfelt passion. A Big Congratulations my friend. As you always do mastering the message. A favorite...
Pandit Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 6:12 AM
Always a joy when you visit ,my friend. Your generous comments are much valued and appreciated--as is your FAVE. Many thanks for your thoughtful insights and a very special thank you for the FAVE.
One Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 1:24 PM
Just back to congratulate you on POTD..
Pandit Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 6:10 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate.
Mo Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 11:20 AM
A well deserved honor Vijay. Enjoyed your fine poem
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:41 PM
Much appreciate--many thanks, Marugu.
Slaughter Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 10:50 AM
A veritable riot of colors and other seasonal sensations. Congrats on POTD, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:40 PM
Glad to see you on my page, Jim. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.
Baker Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honor, Vijay! This was a beautiful poem. I love the way you springle alliterations throughout your poetry. Your imagery was artistic magic, and the blend of nature's beauty and the passion and completeness of mutual love was honored by your words, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:40 PM
Your visit and your generous remarks are always valued and appreciated, my friend. Many thanks, Bill.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a beautiful "Spring Sonata" write. Love It... Have a blessed/wonderful day with you win..............
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:39 PM
Glad you liked the poem, Paula. Much appreciate--many thanks.
McBride  Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on POTD, love it, bringing joy to the season: )
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Thank you Stephan--much appreciate your kind feedback.
Nicole Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 8:23 AM
Dear Vijay, your words take * me * there, to where ' daffodils dance, to where rivers meet oceans; the merging of fiery emotions. ' This is beautiful, dreamy and romantic. Soft and sensual, all at the same time. The last two lines are simply breathtaking. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Glad I could take you on that journey, my friend. Always a joy when you visit., Brandy. Many thanks for your kind insights. Hugs to you as well.
Calasibetta Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 7:51 AM
Vijay, congratulations on your POTD...I think you have won the hearts of all your readers. Kudos! Paulette
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Thank you Paulette--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Kaufman Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Dear Vijay, It's such an exquisite penning and so captivating to the senses. A heartfelt congratulations on this POTD. Although you listed it as free verse, it has a lot of rhymes with in. I was wondering if there is a category for this? Enjoy your well deserved recognition and blessings to you
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:35 PM
So glad to hear from you Nancy. Much appreciate your kind remarks. I like a bit of a rhythm in my poems--no matter the form. Many thanks for stopping by.
Greenhough Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 7:16 AM
I liked how colorful spring flowers heightened the romantic overture of your poem. The meter rises to perfection. Congratulations on your POTD.
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:32 PM
So glad to hear from you, Hilda. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.
May Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Beautiful rhythms of spring, Congrats on POTD
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:32 PM
Much appreciate, Joseph--many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Romance ives throughout your Spring Sonata, Vijay! A pleasure to read this morning and I can certainly see it has been honored as POTD! Congratulations!!
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Thank you Mike--much appreciate, my friend.
Fowler Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 6:08 AM
Oh my. So romantic and sensuous Vijay. The repetition of "take me there" adds to the beauty and mystique. Congratulations on this lovely spring sonata becoming POTD! :)
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Glad to hear from you Linda. Much appreciate--many thanks for your kind feedback.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your honour of POTD, Dear Vijay. No wonder this poem with captivating picturesque images was chosen! Continue writing such lyrical free verse and charm your readers. Best wishes ~
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:30 PM
Much appreciate your thoughtful remarks, Mala. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
AGARWAL Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 5:41 AM
Beautiful poem. Congrats. Also check out my new poem related to a very sensitive issue.
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:29 PM
Thank you Radhika--much appreciate.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 5:35 AM
ooh la la! A much deserving POTD for this lovely write, Vijay! Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:29 PM
Much appreciate, Kim--many thanks, my friend.
Empress Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 5:29 AM
Dear vijay, what a beautiful poem this is, i love how invitingly heartfelt your refrains and rhythm of this write is. Spring sonata so well delivered. This made me stop to see through your lines, burbling tributaries, valleys mountains, multicolored pansies, cherry blossom prompts, crimson tulips! Just so very picturesque and artistically captivating and soulful! I love every line in this! “ take me ther wher oceans meet rivers” and daffodils dance, i think your readers too would resonate. FAVE. Congratulations on POTD too! Well deserved!
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:14 PM
I always await your visit to read your fabulous insights, my friend. Much appreciate your supportive comments and your FAVE, ink. Many thanks.
Rodgers Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 4:04 AM
Good Morning, Vijay, and a big congratulations on getting POTD. It is so deserving, and I am so happy for you. - Blessings, Daniel
Pandit Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 12:27 PM
Thank you for your return visit, Daniel. Much appreciate.
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