Karen Jones Poet Free verse

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For Spring Sonata contest sponsored by Jcb Brul

Spring Sonata

My love you plant me like spring
Tulip lips hydrangeas hips
I drink your sunny spirit
And merge it within my own
And the birds and bees appreciate 
The sweet nectar of love we create
Romance of generations as we age
Hair once golden like daisies 
Mature into the puff of white dandelion 
Even more beautiful in my mind
How your intoxicating floral fuchsia smell
My nose drinks up like at a well
And only quenched when you are there
I grow from our challenges like champagne rain
Toasting the ages of tribulations and triumphs 
Yet remaining united
I am excited for the spring your love bring
And summer’s promise of hot kisses

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Richard Lamoureux March 26, 2024 at 4:43 AM You do romance well. Love the imagery. Karen Jones March 26, 2024 at 6:11 AM Thank you I am afraid I am limited and my muse only works when I am passionate about a subject!

Joseph May March 23, 2024 at 6:38 AM Seasons of romance, Wonderful write Karen Karen Jones March 23, 2024 at 11:39 AM Thanks

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2024 at 12:13 PM wow, amazing personification. GREAT job, Karen Karen Jones March 20, 2024 at 2:08 PM Thanks Andrea!

Hilda Greenhough March 19, 2024 at 8:35 AM I like this comparison poem of love and longevity. The flowers blended in perfect allusion. Karen Jones March 19, 2024 at 9:19 AM Thank you Hilda!

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 18, 2024 at 9:33 PM An awesome composition on love through seasons, Karen. I adore your imagery. Karen Jones March 19, 2024 at 12:06 AM So kind of you to say Evelyn and thanks!

Michael Tor March 18, 2024 at 6:22 PM Karen such a lovely piece filled with romantic essence. Your words are so unique in expressing your affection. My best wishes for the contest. Karen Jones March 18, 2024 at 6:25 PM Thanks Michael!

Christina Bowring March 18, 2024 at 12:02 PM This is such a beautiful, sensual poem dear Karen. It’s so well written and creative. So clever. I love , ‘ Hair once golden like daisies, mature into the puff of white dandelion ‘ - genius simile to describe the passing of time. Amazing write from your talented pen. Unique take on the contest. It should do really well - I loved it! Hugs and smiles xx :):) Karen Jones March 18, 2024 at 2:13 PM Christina I appreciate your support and thoughtful comments. Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar March 18, 2024 at 3:09 AM Loved the champagne rain. Any glass for me? I also wonder who wrote this poem, you or Jcb Brul. Karen Jones March 18, 2024 at 5:04 AM I wrote clearly contest sponsored by JCB so sorry if that was not clear and sure you can enjoy a glass since you are barely of drinking age 21 wink ;0)

Valsa George March 17, 2024 at 10:49 PM This is a beautiful and highly sensuous poem! It shows how love can be a fulfilling urge and motive that thrills the youth and crowns even old age. Beautifully written dear Karen. Karen Jones March 17, 2024 at 11:49 PM Thank you Valsa dear!

Mystic Rose Rose March 17, 2024 at 9:52 AM oh la la its beautiful seductive and filled with je ne sais quoi, a fav, girl ! Karen Jones March 17, 2024 at 10:03 AM I am honored you fav it and thrilled you found it seductive! Thanks Mystic Rose Rose!

Silpika Kalita March 17, 2024 at 9:43 AM A beautiful one, lyrical with vivid similies and soft tender spontaneity Karen Jones March 17, 2024 at 10:01 AM Thank you Silpika!

Vijay Pandit March 17, 2024 at 6:51 AM A beautiful blending of love and nature's exuberance in spring. Lovely voice to your sonata, Karen. Karen Jones March 17, 2024 at 7:31 AM Thanks Vijay!

Silent One March 17, 2024 at 6:23 AM Your poem beautifully captures the essence of love as a blossoming and enduring force that evolves and grows over time. The imagery of planting love like spring, with references to flowers such as tulips, hydrangeas, and daisies, creates a vivid and romantic atmosphere. The metaphor of merging spirits and creating sweet nectar of love evokes a sense of intimacy and connection between you and your beloved. Karen Jones March 17, 2024 at 7:33 AM You comment means a lot and is always so helpful and encouraging thank you Silent One!