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For Spring Sonata contest sponsored by Jcb Brul

My love you plant me like spring Tulip lips hydrangeas hips I drink your sunny spirit And merge it within my own And the birds and bees appreciate The sweet nectar of love we create Romance of generations as we age Hair once golden like daisies Mature into the puff of white dandelion Even more beautiful in my mind How your intoxicating floral fuchsia smell My nose drinks up like at a well And only quenched when you are there I grow from our challenges like champagne rain Toasting the ages of tribulations and triumphs Yet remaining united I am excited for the spring your love bring And summer’s promise of hot kisses

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/26/2024 4:43:00 AM

You do romance well. Love the imagery.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/26/2024 6:11:00 AM

Thank you I am afraid I am limited and my muse only works when I am passionate about a subject!

Joseph May

Date: 3/23/2024 6:38:00 AM

Seasons of romance, Wonderful write Karen

Karen Jones
Date: 3/23/2024 11:39:00 AM

Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2024 12:13:00 PM

wow, amazing personification. GREAT job, Karen

Karen Jones
Date: 3/20/2024 2:08:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/19/2024 8:35:00 AM

I like this comparison poem of love and longevity. The flowers blended in perfect allusion.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/19/2024 9:19:00 AM

Thank you Hilda!

Tom Woody

Date: 3/19/2024 5:56:00 AM

Awesome sonata Karen. My fave lines are 3 and the last one. Have a great week

Karen Jones
Date: 3/19/2024 6:54:00 AM

Thanks for reading Tom!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/18/2024 9:33:00 PM

An awesome composition on love through seasons, Karen. I adore your imagery.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/19/2024 12:06:00 AM

So kind of you to say Evelyn and thanks!

Michael Tor

Date: 3/18/2024 6:22:00 PM

Karen such a lovely piece filled with romantic essence. Your words are so unique in expressing your affection. My best wishes for the contest.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/18/2024 6:25:00 PM

Thanks Michael!

Christina Bowring

Date: 3/18/2024 12:02:00 PM

This is such a beautiful, sensual poem dear Karen. It’s so well written and creative. So clever. I love , ‘ Hair once golden like daisies, mature into the puff of white dandelion ‘ - genius simile to describe the passing of time. Amazing write from your talented pen. Unique take on the contest. It should do really well - I loved it! Hugs and smiles xx :):)

Karen Jones
Date: 3/18/2024 2:13:00 PM

Christina I appreciate your support and thoughtful comments. Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/18/2024 3:09:00 AM

Loved the champagne rain. Any glass for me? I also wonder who wrote this poem, you or Jcb Brul.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/18/2024 5:04:00 AM

I wrote clearly contest sponsored by JCB so sorry if that was not clear and sure you can enjoy a glass since you are barely of drinking age 21 wink ;0)

Valsa George

Date: 3/17/2024 10:49:00 PM

This is a beautiful and highly sensuous poem! It shows how love can be a fulfilling urge and motive that thrills the youth and crowns even old age. Beautifully written dear Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2024 11:49:00 PM

Thank you Valsa dear!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/17/2024 9:52:00 AM

oh la la its beautiful seductive and filled with je ne sais quoi, a fav, girl !

Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2024 10:03:00 AM

I am honored you fav it and thrilled you found it seductive! Thanks Mystic Rose Rose!

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/17/2024 9:43:00 AM

A beautiful one, lyrical with vivid similies and soft tender spontaneity

Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2024 10:01:00 AM

Thank you Silpika!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/17/2024 6:51:00 AM

A beautiful blending of love and nature's exuberance in spring. Lovely voice to your sonata, Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2024 7:31:00 AM

Thanks Vijay!

Silent One

Date: 3/17/2024 6:23:00 AM

Your poem beautifully captures the essence of love as a blossoming and enduring force that evolves and grows over time. The imagery of planting love like spring, with references to flowers such as tulips, hydrangeas, and daisies, creates a vivid and romantic atmosphere. The metaphor of merging spirits and creating sweet nectar of love evokes a sense of intimacy and connection between you and your beloved.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2024 7:33:00 AM

You comment means a lot and is always so helpful and encouraging thank you Silent One!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/17/2024 6:00:00 AM

a delightful take for the contest...a spring sonata that's also a romance poem. I especially liked this line "I grow from our challenges like champagne rain." Exquisite. You have a remarkable talent and beautiful poetic voice! have a splendid day, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 3/17/2024 7:35:00 AM

Wow I appreciate your words Sara and bow to you the diversely talented Haiku Queen. :0)