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Let us compose a sonata that captures the essence of spring's repose. With each note and chord, let nature's beauty unfold, As we embark on a musical journey, untold. In the graceful dance of a short-lived lily magnolia, A crescendo of chorus unfolds, delicate and ephemeral, Petals adorned in hues of pink and white, Whispering secrets of beauty and delight. With each gentle breeze, their melody sways, A symphony of fragrance, their love displays, Their essence lull, a fleeting moment in time, A chorus of life, so serene and sublime. The spring assembles an ensemble of musicians, The thrush and songbird trill with delicate notes, Tulips line up with trumpets, Daffodils sway with violin, Wildflowers dance in the melody, cheering up the Spring arrival. Golden rays, sunflowers enchanted, Pansies, trillium, hellebore, hyacinth gleam, Strings, brass weave like flowers in bloom, Nature's resume in a portrait, glorious theme. The gentle patter of raindrops on rose petals and leaves, A rhythmic percussion, a soothing reprieve. The melody weaves through the showers' embrace, As nature quenches its thirst, at a gentle pace. And finally, the grand finale, a chorus of life, As nature awakens from its slumber, free from strife. The sonata reaches its climax, triumphant and grand, Embracing the beauty of spring, throughout the land.

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Date: 3/9/2024 12:39:00 PM
Lovely personification of the flowers in your description of spring
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Date: 3/9/2024 6:31:00 AM
- Spring's music is to be enjoyed... some beauties only have a short time like your magnolia tree... a beautiful spring poem, Jay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 3/7/2024 4:45:00 PM
I loved this poem, Jay...beautifully crafted poem telling the tale of spring's beautiful journey. I especially liked 'the melody weaves through the showers' embrace.' Such a pleasant read...did you write it for the spring sonata contest? If so, I think it will do great. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Date: 3/7/2024 1:06:00 PM
The spring assembles an ensemble of musicians. The thrush and songbird trill with delicate notes. Enjoyed reading this well-crafted poem, Jay.
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