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Poetry/Free Verse/Spring Sonata
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1627-369-03
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 03, 2024

For the International Contest, Spring Sonata
Sponsor, Jcb Brule, Judged 04/08/2024

Second Place

As spring starts to surface and the trees begin to bloom, we can see God's  reminder to align our hearts to the ne… | Springtime quotes, Flower quotes, Spring  quotes

winter is gone and we welcome Spring sweet warm air makes birds twitter and all of a sudden nature is a rich embroidery oh, a thousand chirpings invite daisies, tulips and daffodils to bloom as down a forest path I meander and purple violets beckon me to stay butterflies kiss pink and yellow blooms as I pluck some blue posies the trees have put on their green-hued gowns oh, I see primrose growing I hear the streams rejoicing that winter is gone snowdrops grow infinite under trees in the forest the sun dappled beneath branches stretching the forest, woods, meadows, and hills are dressing up to welcome for spring' breathing beauty green grass is like a velvet carpet buttercups are nodding their pretty heads O, a blissful breeze is whispering as lilies grow along the river's path and ducks and swans float in serene tranquility

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Date: 3/7/2024 8:16:00 AM
Nature is waking up with spring's arrival. Beautiful flowers welcome us on the way. Daisies, tulips and daffodils are the first ones to announce their appearance. The ambience you have created is pleasantly beautiful. There is music in the wind and symphony in the sound of the rivers and streams. The poem is full of sensory delights. All the best, dear Constance.
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Date: 3/7/2024 10:45:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/5/2024 11:45:00 AM
What a beautiful description of spring's arrival! Enjoyed reading it! -Smita
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Date: 3/6/2024 5:21:00 PM
Smita, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/4/2024 10:44:00 AM
Nice spring sonata.
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:12:00 PM
Jay, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/3/2024 5:30:00 PM
Dear Constance, Your poem elegantly orchestrates the symphony of nature's awakening with exquisite beauty. Each line blooms like a flower, creating a wonderful changing season. Your words evoke the sensory delights of spring, inviting us to revel in its splendor. As I read your poem, I am transported to the forest's embrace, where the air hums with life and the earth pulsates with renewal. - Blessings, Daniel
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2024 5:13:00 PM
Daniel, thank you so much for the compliment and the wonderful comment, appreciate, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/3/2024 4:51:00 PM
with your imagery you've captured all the beauty that comes with the onset of the spring season. I loved "buttercups are nodding," "I hear the trees rejoicing that winter is gone." Your poem was alive is the best way I can describe it. Have a lovely evening, Sara
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:14:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the compliment and lovely comment, hugs, Constance
Date: 3/3/2024 12:23:00 PM
Such a beautiful spring poem. It's a favourite for me. Well written!
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Date: 3/4/2024 5:15:00 PM
Jeanette, thank you so much for the compliment and the FAV, hugs, Constance

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