Spring Sonata

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Written: Mars 1st, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Spring sonata serenades a zest of love bloom Daffodils dance, tulips swing, birds sing and fly Azure sky, brilliant sun, and young leaves sway Love serenade, rising sonata, flower dance Beauty blooms as birds sing a harmonious song Spring sonata, heavenly bequest, a gift of love. Solo sings soulfully, squandering souls sturdily Sweet sparrows swing the spring stratum Spirits swagger solemnly, satiated, and stiff Sleepy seraphic spirits seek a simulacrum Sumptuous sequential slim spending spree. Relaxing on emerald grass in comely spring sun Her soul felt fluid and fastidious as a feather Fantastic "Feel finical to thaw me in your hand!" It's tough to tackle thorny tremors in the chest Luscious peaks can be a day impetus sonata. Relax, holding my hand to my bosom Quixotic susurrus rises akin to breeze Oh, idyllic souls, still replete with enthusiasm! From hilltop, sky, and earth, sojourn equidistant Glance into my eyes to witness ambrosian bliss. Stay silent—your heartbeat discourse to mine Recall our zealous fantasy vista from this peak Our quest blesses us with a stupendous soul leap Your doe eyes shatter, while we're placid As mortals, pain is a mongrel, eternal mate. Let's linger till the sun auric dust felicitously flecks Stories of orbs vanishing and raw ones emerge As placebo silence decays, a peace aura arises Night's envious gaze descry us from distance Back, we'll transcend limits and obscurity. Embrace the waltz of my Moonlight Sonata Follow to fancy a whimsical odyssey! Nodding off with drowsy eyelids I collocate my corpulent core with you My moonlight sonata, you induce anguish in my soul.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/5/2024 3:57:00 PM

I like the way you describe the vernal equinox. You are so mysterious that it's almost hidden beyond view. You are so clever. Well, It's just a couple of weeks away now and it's going to get warmer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2024 12:35:00 PM

- One of the most beautiful descriptions of spring, Las :) - With a sense for important details and nuances - A time for everything that happens under the sky :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/2/2024 3:50:00 PM

Hello Sotto, You have orchestrated a symphony of love and longing, intertwining nature's beauty with the depths of human emotion. Each wonderful stanza shows the fervor of spring and the intricacies of the human spirit. Your amazing words create love's tender dance amidst the changing seasons. As I read your poem, I felt a kinship with the emotions you so eloquently expressed. Your imagery evokes a sense of wonder and yearning, inviting me the reader to immerse myself in the melody of your words. A very artistic piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/2/2024 7:06:00 AM

So very delightful as the joy of spring, my friend. Awesome descriptions: --Daffodils dance, tulips swing, birds sing and fly Azure sky, brilliant sun, and young leaves sway Love serenade, rising sonata, flower dance Beauty blooms as birds sing a harmonious song---and so much more of nature's dance you bring to fore, Lasaad.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/2/2024 5:38:00 AM

noticed that at the beginning you used 'Mars 1st.' Nice touch. Spring has ignited your muse resulting in a charming poem of springlike love, its potential, and the uncertainty of our human condition. I took delight in the last verse, the invitation to dance whimsically. (The alliterative 2d verse underscores your talent and gift as a poet). Am faving, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/2/2024 5:24:00 AM

Your poem offers a vision of hope and transcendence, suggesting that even in the face of pain and uncertainty, love and connection have the power to uplift and inspire. The imagery of embracing the waltz of the Moonlight Sonata and transcending limits and obscurity speaks to the potential of love and the human spirit. In summary, this poem is a beautifully crafted exploration of spring, love, and the human experience, inviting readers to contemplate the beauty and complexity of life's journey.

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 3/1/2024 10:46:00 PM

A splendid spring sonata, master Sotto written with a masterly diction and a flowing rhythm. The alliteration in the second stanza is simply breathtaking. A sure win for a contest.

Valsa George

Date: 3/1/2024 9:56:00 PM

The beauty of nature and its vibrancy in spring have heightened the passion in the heart of the lovers. Reading this poem gives one a feeling that all the mesmerizing charms of nature are brought before our eyes. Your fantastic descriptions are mindboggling, especially the second stanza with its wonderful alliteration. What a rich gift for words! A splendid celebration of spring. All the Best, dear Lasaad.

Bill Baker

Date: 3/1/2024 8:32:00 PM

Your generous use of alliteration was pleasing as I read though your poem, Sotto Poet. I especially enjoyed that marvelous second verse, quite a creative task to complete with a clear meaning. A nice welcoming Spring Sonata, my friend. Have a nice day. Bill