Spring Snow

Blooms in early March 
A pear less fruit tree awakes
Bringing the spring snow

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James Fraser

September 14, 2009 at 12:39 PM

You write wonderful Haiku's Abe>>James

Steve Edmonds

March 29, 2009 at 10:08 AM

We had some Spring snow yesterday, but not this warm.

Carolyn Devonshire

March 25, 2009 at 9:09 PM

Abe, the fruit trees are in full bloom in Florida. A friend in NH is still seeing some snow, though. Nice work. Carolyn ps - Cayce was a consultant for Woodrow Wilson. You'll find quite a bit on him if you google his name.

Brian Strand

March 24, 2009 at 4:25 AM

Nice work Abe..Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Darleen Bilyeu

March 12, 2009 at 11:14 AM

really lovin this poem Mr. L!!! Nice write!!!

Arany P.

March 8, 2009 at 6:05 AM

wow!! what a picture you have drawn... loved this haiku... well presented!! ~ Arany

Raul Moreno

March 7, 2009 at 9:20 PM

Two thumbs up on this one. Great haiku, thought, and title. I see pear less fruit trees blooming all over looking like what you beautifully described. Your observant eye caught a lovely to scene to write about...Raul

Laurie Ginn

March 7, 2009 at 6:04 PM

I've just picked pears once and eaten them but the taste was so different. Nice job Abe.

Joyce Johnson

March 7, 2009 at 5:08 PM

Hi Abe. Nice to hear from you. This is a nice haiku. Very well timed for me. We are getting a snowfall of heavy wet snow right now when we should have fields of flowers here in Western Washington. I'm longing for spring. Love, joyce

March 7, 2009 at 5:04 PM

Interesting perspective in this poem for good reading. Much captured in just three lines. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this haiku with us and for your kind words on my poem. Have a nice day! Karen

Robin L. Gass

March 7, 2009 at 3:57 PM

What a lovely picture you have painted with this perfect Haiku, Abe. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I like the idea of that being a time of maturation. Gives me something to pnder. Love, Robin

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