Spring Showers

I loved a walk in the rain
Early one morning
When no one was about
I felt refreshed
Invigorated
Ready for the day ahead

And I loved a walk in the rain
Late that same night
No one was around
I felt relaxed
Unwound
Ready for a restful night  

For Russell’s Spring Showers contest, 1st April 2013
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Kendrick Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Jones Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 6:09 PM
Congrats Jack.....
Gorelick Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Relaxed and refreshed...neat idea..congrats. BG
Oyewole Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 9:38 AM
Congrats on yourt win.
A   Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 8:31 AM
Jack, Congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Spring Shower" contest. Nothing lovelier than the fresh felling of spring approaching. *Always & Forever~LINDA
Roberts Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 2:32 AM
congrats Jack, well done my friend...Seren
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 4:56 PM
Reads like a winner to me..We are going to experience so rain and possible weather tonight so it seems now..Thanks for stopping by..Princess is beside me again rest from sleeping all afternoon..Ha!!Sara
Poet Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 11:45 AM
A refreshing read jack.Very nice.
Duncan Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 7:59 PM
This is very nice,,, there were spring showers here over the weekend, and thunder and lighting. I was think how I love the smell of rain ;}
Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 3:30 PM
another short but sweet entry. I enjoyed your poems today and I always hope to see you posting more and more, Jack.
Haick Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 11:50 AM
There's nothing more refreshing than a quiet walk after a spring rain, Jack..so true! Enjoyed!! My best wishes for the contest, my friend. Always, Annalise
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2013 at 10:12 AM
A refreshing rain ..... and a good night. - Good luck in the contest Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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