Spring Shower

green leaves of old trees

  newly washed from the rainfall

   now brightly shining

under the emerging sun

    ... the spring shower now over
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 6:42 PM
Such vivid imagery! You capture the shower so well with your perfect wording. Well done! Keith
Macmillan Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 8:24 PM
You captured this so well.... this weekend will be hot and sunny here in Waterloo. Hope you have a fab weekend with your daughters. I imagine myself in your shoes, my girl all grown up, and this sometimes makes me smile and sometimes makes me teary eyed... hope you eat, drink and be merry. Hugs, Cyndi
Pettit Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 10:03 PM
Rain seems to purify the air. I love the smell of a garden or forest after a rain. You have described a spring shower here well.
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