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Spring Patchwork

Patches of snow are left behind A patchwork, in the lawn to find Zig zagging flights, songs can be heard Different directions, from each bird They are now, talking about spring In bright sunlight, the blue skies bring Flowers wait to show their faces Soon, their smiles will be all places Joining the birds in a spring show As warmth designs the melting snow So much movement has caught my eye Winter, it's time to say goodbye Heidi Sands 4/9/24 8 syllables (C)opyright

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2024 12:38:00 PM

What a lovely Spring write/great ending. Winter is gone for now, hooray. I love the spring..... Have a blessed day writing away.............

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/11/2024 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Paula. I look forward to the flowers. I hope you have a blessed day too :)

Charles Messina

Date: 4/11/2024 4:40:00 AM

Amen! To saying good-bye to winter. A lovely write, Heidi. :) Charlie

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/11/2024 5:09:00 AM

Thank you Charlie. I hope you have a nice day :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/10/2024 6:32:00 PM

A lovely patchwork!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/11/2024 5:08:00 AM

Thank you Kim. I hope you have a great day :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/10/2024 4:58:00 PM

Heidi, A delightful farewell to winter. A delightful invitation to the arrival of spring. Impressively executed. It evokes delight and excitement

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/10/2024 5:10:00 PM

Thank you. It is nice to hear that :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/10/2024 2:50:00 PM

A clever good bye to winter. And a joyous invitation to spring. Very well done. It brings smiles.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/10/2024 3:52:00 PM

Thank you very much Hilda :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/10/2024 5:48:00 AM

Delightfully ruminating in inspiration of spring. Wonderful images convey welcome to the new season and goodbye to winter. A FAVE for the spirit of your poem that resonates, my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/10/2024 7:01:00 AM

Hi Vijay. I am so happy it resonates! You made my day and the Fave too. Thank you so much. I was inspired by the Spring Temps and sights yesterday :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/9/2024 4:26:00 PM

Hello Heidi, yes it is time to say good bye to winter. It is the longest season of all seasons. It is time for spring but winter does not want to leave yet winter still wants to hang around. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/10/2024 10:35:00 AM

Hello Heidi, It starts off being cooler then it warms up, not too much. Just enough to gert rid of the chill. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/10/2024 6:59:00 AM

Yes, you are right Darlene. It is hanging on. We are up and down with Temps. Thank you for commenting. I hope you have a nice day. Hugs :)