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Spring Night

How finely twilight applies lipstick to the sky! His brush touches each fold as the sky does shy. Eyebrows and eyelashes he so minutely paints, As though powerful prayers and blessings of the saints...! Why do Nyx and Hyades at this juncture weep, As though widowed by Zeus lost their eternal sleep? Maiden stars get wet and miss their timely twinkle, Rain, as though hysteric, on clouds showers sprinkle...! The moon, entering, like a bold ballet dancer, Blinks as though to the night's quiz he has no answer; Nature, as routine, her seasonal games enacts, Nyx, Hyades and Zeus act as per rhythmic facts...!!! 03 March 2023 In Bloom Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 3/16/2023 9:22:00 AM
Beautiful opening with twilight applying lipstick to the sky. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Date: 3/10/2023 8:40:00 AM
Wait! I meant Christuraj! Please forgive!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:14:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/10/2023 8:37:00 AM
Such an interesting poem, Joseph! I'm going to google Nyx, for we haven't met. :) Your poem is an enjoyable read. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/16/2023 6:41:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/7/2023 12:22:00 PM
A poem delighting in the delight of a moonlit spring night. Love the graceful integration of mythology and subtle personification! Congrats and high fives Chris! Blessings.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:14:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/7/2023 11:34:00 AM
Wonderful write Christuraj, Congrats on your win
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:14:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/7/2023 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write/ending. Have a blessed day...............
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:14:00 PM
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Date: 3/7/2023 3:30:00 AM
Wow, what an imagination! Well penned. Congratulations on your win
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:14:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/6/2023 6:12:00 PM
A lovely and well-crafted poem, Alex. Congratulations on your top-winning placement.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:13:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 3/6/2023 3:22:00 PM
Beautifully written Chris. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:13:00 PM
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Date: 3/3/2023 1:27:00 AM
This is beautiful, Christuraj, especially the first stanza:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/15/2023 10:13:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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