Spring, my love

Spring
my love,
enchanting,
greets me with dawn's ~
bright beautiful smile,
hair decked in verdant hues,
blossoms in her cheeks, pink & white,
wearing the rose necklace in neck,
daffodils dance with her in the wind,
She waits for me to dance in moonlit night.
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Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 7:48 AM
I have read your winning work and found it to be very interesting. Congratulations!! Way to go. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 7:14 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Spring write. Spring will be here very soon.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away..........
George Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 7:29 PM
Back to your beautiful poem once more with Congratulations on your first place win, dear Jay
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 12:34 PM
Jay, congratulations on your first place win with your wonderful poem, beautiful and creative!
Andresen Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 11:44 AM
- Lovely written, Jay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
George Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 10:00 PM
This personification of Spring is so beautiful decked in finery like a bride. Enjoyed reading. All the best dear Jay !
La France Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 1:42 PM
Jay, beautifully penned, I love your poem, hugs, Constance
Poet Avatar
February 15, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Nicely crafted Etheree, Jay. Expression of love throughout
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