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Spring, my love

Spring my love, enchanting, greets me with dawn's ~ bright beautiful smile, hair decked in verdant hues, blossoms in her cheeks, pink & white, wearing the rose necklace in neck, daffodils dance with her in the wind, She waits for me to dance in moonlit night.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2024 7:48:00 AM

I have read your winning work and found it to be very interesting. Congratulations!! Way to go. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2024 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Spring write. Spring will be here very soon.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away..........

Valsa George

Date: 3/3/2024 7:29:00 PM

Back to your beautiful poem once more with Congratulations on your first place win, dear Jay

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2024 12:34:00 PM

Jay, congratulations on your first place win with your wonderful poem, beautiful and creative!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2024 11:44:00 AM

- Lovely written, Jay :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 2/15/2024 10:00:00 PM

This personification of Spring is so beautiful decked in finery like a bride. Enjoyed reading. All the best dear Jay !

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/15/2024 4:44:00 PM

your poem is filled with love and admiration. I especially liked "daffodils dance with her in the wind" -- stunning words and image. Have a wonderful evening, Sara

Constance La France

Date: 2/15/2024 1:42:00 PM

Jay, beautifully penned, I love your poem, hugs, Constance

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/15/2024 11:13:00 AM

Nicely crafted Etheree, Jay. Expression of love throughout