Spring Morn

Daybreak’s sun awakens a pristine day
My muse somersaults with felicity
Unmarked canvas thirsts eccentricity
Spring flaunting her mesmerizing bouquet

Flirty summons through a garden gateway
May’s perfume is the most seductive plea
Like an intoxicated honeybee
I jump to greet my first vacation day

The calm after the rain jostles my heart
A swift flourish of aromatic blooms  
A bounty of inspiration for art 
A rave burst of happiness to impart

Concocting to create precious heirlooms
It’s perfect time to play Spring by Mozart



AP: 3rd place 2020

Submitted on July 6, 2018 for contest YOUR BEST SONNET 2018 sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON -  RANKED 3RD

and on March 9, 2018 for contest PETRACHAN SONNET sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/13/2018 5:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 7/13/2018 2:02:00 PM
The rhyme is terrific and well structured, if I might say so. Congrats on your win. Be well.
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thanks you so much, Greg. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/9/2018 10:06:00 PM
A joyous sonnet of enlivened imagery, Line. Congratulations on your fine win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/9/2018 10:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Very appreciated.
Date: 7/9/2018 4:32:00 PM
Such a joyous, upbeat ending to a vividly depicted springtime canvas. Excellent poesy, Line! Congrats on your win in the contest! Best always, Gershon
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Date: 7/9/2018 10:10:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/9/2018 7:15:00 AM
This makes me happy to read, like a little fairy muse inside me awakes and twirls in twinkle dust. I love the fun flow and energy this poem radiates! So good :)
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Date: 7/9/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Casarah.
Date: 7/8/2018 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful!
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Date: 7/8/2018 8:28:00 PM
Thanks, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 7/8/2018 12:43:00 PM
Very nice Line, congrats on a top placement!
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Date: 7/8/2018 8:28:00 PM
Thanks, John. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/12/2018 11:12:00 AM
A sonneteer's sonnet, so to speak, Line! It's a FAVE for me. Thank you for a superb write/read. (btw: What make it an 'Italian sonnet?') Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 3/12/2018 11:17:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely and message visit, Gershon. I will SoupMail you.
Date: 3/10/2018 10:28:00 AM
Very nicely done, Line. A flowing sonnet on spring.
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Date: 3/10/2018 3:33:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and for leaving a comment, Subimal.
Date: 3/9/2018 10:11:00 PM
Superb Line!! Fantastic imagery.. Really enjoyed reading your creativity..
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Date: 3/9/2018 10:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robertina. Much appreciated.
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