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Spring Mist

a crimson haze 
lingers over the lake...
    veiled nostalgia

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/18/2017 9:15:00 PM

hmm.., sweet sensual memories of a bygone love maybe..? In the Spring of life when love, in all its seductive allure, was a new adventure..? That's how I see your beautiful write Paul with its stunning and evoking imagery... I love your title too, it extends the Haiku.. Brilliant and fantastic!!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/19/2017 9:54:00 AM

Hmmm...you are not far off the mark, Susan! When we find ourselves in peaceful surroundings, our mind tends to wander, usually into the past. I love going back in time...Thank you for yet another pleasant visit; you are most welcome. ps...haiku do not usually have a title, but here you cannot post a poem without putting in the title. Warm regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/11/2017 7:34:00 PM

This is a beautiful Haiku. A 7 Someone criticize my poem A Good Mystery. Some of I understood some I did not, would you please read what was said, then tell me what the person was talking about? I ask because I did not understand what was said. This is my first criticism.I will rewrite A Goodmystery. Thank you. Regards Dar

Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2017 9:11:00 AM

Thank you, Darlene. With regards to your poem, I have sent you a soupmail...I hope you received it. A Good Mystery makes for an enjoyable read. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/26/2017 6:58:00 AM

Lovely image, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/26/2017 8:44:00 AM

Thank you, Kim:) Regards // paul

John Michaels

Date: 4/20/2017 6:05:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Paul. Good luck with the contest. Regards, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/21/2017 7:10:00 AM

Thank you, John. Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 4/20/2017 6:42:00 AM

Really beautiful Paul and good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/20/2017 12:56:00 PM

Many thanks, Maria. Regards /// paul

Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/18/2017 11:56:00 AM

I wish I was there. Beautiful painting Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 1:45:00 PM

You are welcome, Pashang! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2017 6:41:00 PM

very nice, Paul. Is it for the contest of Rick? Great creativity.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea; yes, it's for Rick's contest (I think this time there will be only 5 on the list). Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/17/2017 6:18:00 PM

Perfect haiku, Paul. An entire painting in so few syllables.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 1:34:00 PM

Pleased that you like it, Agnes. Thank you! Regards // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/17/2017 11:19:00 AM

ooh pretty as a picture :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 1:01:00 PM

Hi Casarah:) Thank you...always a pleasure to have you visiting. Regards // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 4/17/2017 4:06:00 AM

A pleasant read poem.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 11:20:00 AM

Thank you, Afolabi. Regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/17/2017 2:51:00 AM

Haiku is short and brilliant. Well said. Thanks for sharing it.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 11:19:00 AM

Thank you for reading, liking and being supportive, Ravi...Regards // paul

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/17/2017 2:08:00 AM

I'm there, remembering. Brilliant Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 11:17:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by with a 'brilliant' comment, Elizabeth. Regards // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/17/2017 1:15:00 AM

You write beautifully, Paul. I always stand in awe of your poetry

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 11:11:00 AM

Thank you, dear Eileen...I find myself reciprocating your words:) Hugs // paul

David Mohn

Date: 4/16/2017 8:40:00 PM

terrific Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 10:46:00 AM

"Terrific" from a fellow haiku writer is much appreciated, David! Thank you. // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/16/2017 5:36:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 10:42:00 AM

Thank you, Arthur! Regards // paul

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 4/16/2017 5:30:00 PM

Lovely use of imagery...

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 8:16:00 AM

Thank you, Adeniji. Pleased to make your acquaintance. // paul

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/16/2017 4:13:00 PM

gorgeous imagery, tranquility in words. so lovely Paul:)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 8:15:00 AM

I love your comments, Lynn...thank you:) Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/16/2017 3:16:00 PM

absolutely beautiful Paul!:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 4/18/2017 8:14:00 AM

Thank you Jan:) Glad you enjoyed...hugs // paul

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