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Spring Melody

melodious birds
    awaken the dawn with song --
         spring is in the air

3/27/21
For Tania Kitchin's Spring Haiku contest
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Virginia Gelok Date: 4/16/2021 11:27:00 AM I really want to try this one day soon. It says so much with so few words. very nice. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/17/2021 3:40:00 PM Thank you, Virginia!

Line Gauthier Date: 4/7/2021 8:53:00 PM Charming ~ Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/17/2021 3:39:00 PM Thank you, Line!

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 4/6/2021 11:09:00 AM very evocative of spring - congrats on your win in the contest! :) Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/7/2021 1:05:00 PM Thank you, Charlotte!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2021 5:30:00 PM this is REALLY pretty, Kim. Congrats. One of my favorites. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/7/2021 1:04:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 4/5/2021 3:23:00 PM A fresh awakening of both day and season, is beautifully imagined here, Kim. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Evelyn Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/7/2021 1:04:00 PM Thank you, Evelyn!

Jan Allison Date: 4/5/2021 1:06:00 PM a little spring gem Kim, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/7/2021 1:04:00 PM Thank you, Jan!

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/5/2021 9:03:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Birds, songs and spring, what a wonderful write. Have a blessed day/week................ Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/5/2021 12:41:00 PM Thank you, Paula! Blessings!

Tania Kitchin Date: 4/4/2021 7:54:00 AM Kim, congratulations on your winning placement, lovely imagery! Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 4/5/2021 12:41:00 PM Thank you for my placement, Tania! Blessings!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 3/30/2021 3:24:00 AM Their is nothing as gorgeous as bird speak to wake up Spring! Well penned, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 3/30/2021 9:48:00 AM Thank you, Caren! The birds here (Florida) start their singing before dawn!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/28/2021 12:43:00 PM May it spring come sooner. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 3/30/2021 9:47:00 AM Where I am (Florida) it has arrived. Thank you, Victor!

Robert Pettit Date: 3/27/2021 3:56:00 PM They wake me up every morning when the try to get inside my air conditioner. Another great write, Kim. Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 3/30/2021 9:46:00 AM Thank you, Robert!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2021 12:51:00 PM - The most beautiful song on earth, Kim ... best wishes in the contest - Have a nice weekend and a wonderful Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 3/30/2021 9:46:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise! Wishing you a wonderful Easter also!

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/27/2021 12:50:00 PM Lovely spring image Kim. Good luck Tom Login to Reply Kim Merryman Date: 3/30/2021 9:45:00 AM Thank you, Tom!