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Spring Melody

melodious birds awaken the dawn with song -- spring is in the air 3/27/21 For Tania Kitchin's Spring Haiku contest used PS Syllable checker

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Virginia Gelok

Date: 4/16/2021 11:27:00 AM

I really want to try this one day soon. It says so much with so few words. very nice.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:40:00 PM

Thank you, Virginia!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/7/2021 8:53:00 PM

Charming ~

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/17/2021 3:39:00 PM

Thank you, Line!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/6/2021 11:09:00 AM

very evocative of spring - congrats on your win in the contest! :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:05:00 PM

Thank you, Charlotte!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2021 5:30:00 PM

this is REALLY pretty, Kim. Congrats. One of my favorites.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:04:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/5/2021 3:23:00 PM

A fresh awakening of both day and season, is beautifully imagined here, Kim. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Evelyn

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:04:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2021 1:06:00 PM

a little spring gem Kim, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/7/2021 1:04:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/5/2021 9:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Birds, songs and spring, what a wonderful write. Have a blessed day/week................

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/5/2021 12:41:00 PM

Thank you, Paula! Blessings!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/4/2021 7:54:00 AM

Kim, congratulations on your winning placement, lovely imagery!

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/5/2021 12:41:00 PM

Thank you for my placement, Tania! Blessings!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/30/2021 3:24:00 AM

Their is nothing as gorgeous as bird speak to wake up Spring! Well penned, Kim.

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:48:00 AM

Thank you, Caren! The birds here (Florida) start their singing before dawn!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/28/2021 12:43:00 PM

May it spring come sooner.

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:47:00 AM

Where I am (Florida) it has arrived. Thank you, Victor!

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/27/2021 3:56:00 PM

They wake me up every morning when the try to get inside my air conditioner. Another great write, Kim.

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, Robert!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2021 12:51:00 PM

- The most beautiful song on earth, Kim ... best wishes in the contest - Have a nice weekend and a wonderful Easter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:46:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! Wishing you a wonderful Easter also!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/27/2021 12:50:00 PM

Lovely spring image Kim. Good luck Tom

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/30/2021 9:45:00 AM

Thank you, Tom!