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Spring Lover's

Clean spring wind tickles my every pore; through skin, soothing my inner tempest with effervescent feathers, surrounding my every sense with F L U I D I T Y Powerful and tender, like a lovers kiss - it glides, temporarily smitten with my earthy skin; my motionless frame - exploring my body with its ancient mind - searching in vain for the secret of my existence – a secret stayed – grounded - for gravity, Wind knows not… We rejoice in each-others abilities - mysteries, and for a moment, we are one. Him of the sky; I of the earth – a moment on no time’s horizon... two lovers of spring, exploring the unknown…

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Date: 7/26/2009 12:40:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this past week Kristin.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/25/2009 7:03:00 PM
Nice to see your artistic touch on the board again. Congrats Kristin on "Spring Lover's" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/25/2009 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on having this exquisite poem featured. Love Heidie
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Date: 3/1/2012 11:13:00 AM
...Ow Sweeet Baby * Gonna Have To Stop By & Taste Your Sweeet Lips ‡
Date: 7/25/2009 11:40:00 AM
Flows fluidly and good imagery. Congratulations on being featured this week. I liked your creativity.
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Date: 7/22/2009 2:40:00 PM
i really like the form of this one. check out some of my poems
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations on this featured poetry. Insoiring peace of art. Ernilando
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Date: 7/20/2009 7:14:00 AM
this is a wonderful, creative piece, this is exremely lovely.., you are such an intelligent poet, one. please keep writing friend and congrats on your awesome piece bieng featured this week. Adeleke
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Date: 7/20/2009 6:07:00 AM
Kristin,..congratulations on this great poetry being featured this week ! Many more to ya ! james
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Date: 7/20/2009 4:29:00 AM
Well worth , the front page , Souper K ....
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Date: 7/20/2009 12:32:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured God bless you.
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kristin. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/12/2009 8:21:00 PM
Dear Kristin, Belated Congradulations on YOUR Win in Cristy's Contest I have a learning disorder that makes it hard for me to write a comment, worth a sh-- I also send YOU Congradulations on "The Eternal Tree" as a featured POEM I can see by the comments YOU recieve YOU are very well read and YOUR POEMS are so natural YOUR pen is alive with knowleged I bow to YOUR Poetic Grace Thank- YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS... HG
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Date: 1/22/2009 8:19:00 AM
Kristin congratulations on placing third in Christie's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/6/2009 11:55:00 PM
Congrats on you success in Christy/Nigel's contest.Kristin. Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings
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Date: 1/6/2009 3:21:00 PM
Bravo!!!! Any man would wish to be such a wind! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/6/2009 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Raul
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Date: 1/6/2009 2:00:00 PM
Kistin Congratulations on your win in the contest! Lovely Poem! Laura :)
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Date: 1/6/2009 11:23:00 AM
YAY and Congratulations Kristin on your big win in Christie and Nigel's contest! Gorgeous poetry and so well deserved! Love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 1/6/2009 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win! This is so beautiful, Kristin. A truly awesome write. (Sorry I missed it before!). Love, Robin
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Date: 3/1/2012 11:21:00 AM
‡ . . "Sweeet Beautiful Robin" . . ‡
Date: 1/6/2009 9:39:00 AM
Kristin, this is wonderful! Congrats to you - I loved reading it! God bless, Amy :)
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Date: 1/6/2009 8:21:00 AM
This one blows me away (no pun intended!) !! Congratulations dear Kristen....a stand out among the winners!~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/13/2008 2:55:00 PM
This simply lifted me away like a spring breeze. What a feeling. Expressed so well, and with such depth of beauty, I felt both lighter and enlightened. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/13/2008 8:48:00 AM
Great work.. Kristin... Your talent is so Good... I just envy you... your friend in Poetry... JackReed3...
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Date: 6/13/2008 4:43:00 AM
This read is visually powerful and stunning. The flow offers grace and the imagery is breathtaking. Kristin, never stop writing, this is excellent! MIchael
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