Spring Lover's

Clean spring wind 
     tickles my every pore;
          through skin,
              soothing my inner tempest with 
                    effervescent feathers,
                        surrounding 
                 my every 
            sense
      with 

      F
           L
                U
             I
         D
      I 
            T
                  Y

Powerful and tender,
       like a lovers kiss -
                it glides, 
        temporarily smitten
    with my earthy skin;
my motionless frame -
      exploring my body
           with its ancient mind -
                searching in vain for the secret 
      of my existence –
a secret stayed –
      grounded -

             for gravity,

                   Wind
                             knows
                                         not…

We rejoice in each-others abilities -
         mysteries, and
                   for a moment,

     we are one.

Him of the sky;
        I of the earth –
               a moment on no time’s horizon...

two lovers of spring,

        exploring the unknown…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Strand Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 12:40 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this past week Kristin.Rgds Brian
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July 25, 2009 at 7:03 PM
Nice to see your artistic touch on the board again. Congrats Kristin on "Spring Lover's" being featured. Vince
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July 25, 2009 at 2:56 PM
Congratulations on having this exquisite poem featured. Love Heidie
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March 1, 2012 at 11:13 AM
...Ow Sweeet Baby * Gonna Have To Stop By & Taste Your Sweeet Lips ‡
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July 25, 2009 at 11:40 AM
Flows fluidly and good imagery. Congratulations on being featured this week. I liked your creativity.
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July 22, 2009 at 2:40 PM
i really like the form of this one. check out some of my poems
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July 21, 2009 at 10:37 PM
Congratulations on this featured poetry. Insoiring peace of art. Ernilando
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July 20, 2009 at 7:14 AM
this is a wonderful, creative piece, this is exremely lovely.., you are such an intelligent poet, one. please keep writing friend and congrats on your awesome piece bieng featured this week. Adeleke
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July 20, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Kristin,..congratulations on this great poetry being featured this week ! Many more to ya ! james
Kelly Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 4:29 AM
Well worth , the front page , Souper K ....
Christian Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 12:32 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured God bless you.
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July 19, 2009 at 2:52 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week>>James
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July 19, 2009 at 2:32 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Kristin. Love, Carol
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March 12, 2009 at 8:21 PM
Dear Kristin, Belated Congradulations on YOUR Win in Cristy's Contest I have a learning disorder that makes it hard for me to write a comment, worth a sh-- I also send YOU Congradulations on "The Eternal Tree" as a featured POEM I can see by the comments YOU recieve YOU are very well read and YOUR POEMS are so natural YOUR pen is alive with knowleged I bow to YOUR Poetic Grace Thank- YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments ALWAYS... HG
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 8:19 AM
Kristin congratulations on placing third in Christie's contest - God Bless, MJ
Strand Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Congrats on you success in Christy/Nigel's contest.Kristin. Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings
Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 3:21 PM
Bravo!!!! Any man would wish to be such a wind! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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January 6, 2009 at 3:08 PM
Congratulations on your win...Raul
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January 6, 2009 at 2:00 PM
Kistin Congratulations on your win in the contest! Lovely Poem! Laura :)
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January 6, 2009 at 11:23 AM
YAY and Congratulations Kristin on your big win in Christie and Nigel's contest! Gorgeous poetry and so well deserved! Love, Shar xoxo
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January 6, 2009 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win! This is so beautiful, Kristin. A truly awesome write. (Sorry I missed it before!). Love, Robin
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March 1, 2012 at 11:21 AM
‡ . . "Sweeet Beautiful Robin" . . ‡
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January 6, 2009 at 9:39 AM
Kristin, this is wonderful! Congrats to you - I loved reading it! God bless, Amy :)
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January 6, 2009 at 8:21 AM
This one blows me away (no pun intended!) !! Congratulations dear Kristen....a stand out among the winners!~ Love, Carrie
Winter Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 2:55 PM
This simply lifted me away like a spring breeze. What a feeling. Expressed so well, and with such depth of beauty, I felt both lighter and enlightened. Love, Shar
Reed Avatar
June 13, 2008 at 8:48 AM
Great work.. Kristin... Your talent is so Good... I just envy you... your friend in Poetry... JackReed3...
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June 13, 2008 at 4:43 AM
This read is visually powerful and stunning. The flow offers grace and the imagery is breathtaking. Kristin, never stop writing, this is excellent! MIchael
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