Spring Kissed Field

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purple coneflower nectar monarchs saunter on squirrel bounds across 3/20/2021

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/25/2021 8:07:00 PM

Eve, Gentle place of peace in haiku's saunter. So nice. -Richard

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/25/2021 12:00:00 AM

Perfect haiku' Like the finish.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/22/2021 5:31:00 PM

Pretty descriptive little write about spring flowers.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/22/2021 1:12:00 PM

Exquisitely done Eve. A beautiful haiku.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2021 11:12:00 AM

Perfect haiku. The butterflies are lovely.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2021 11:29:00 AM

- Looking forward to the beautiful flowers of spring in all colors ... great haiku, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/21/2021 5:15:00 AM

Creative and descriptive haiku that you have written in this one. Once the plants of spring and summer start to bloom and butterflies once again appear there is happiness in seeing the dance of the butterflies. Thanks for dropping by my page to tell me I placed in your contest. It was very hard for me to try to even think about writing a nursery rhyme and I was unsure about what I had written thinking is a nursery rhyme or just a poem. I tried to punctuate to show the rhythm. Sara