Spring Kiss

By-Tahera Mannan

A  gentle warmth tapped at my old door
Green leaves slipped out from under white
A sensual breeze caressed
The flowers and ripe fruits
His warm breath touched me
As our lips met
Butterflies
Softly
Blush

For Micheal’s ‘nonet me a spring kiss’ contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 6:33 PM
Tahera, This is not only sensual, but beautiful! Sorry, I'm late, but Congratulations my dear friend! Always, Annalise
Poet Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 6:31 AM
Wonderful Nonnet Tahera!Congrats on your win--kashinath
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations on your win today in Michael's "Nonet Me A Kiss" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 5:51 AM
Hi Tahera, congratulations on your HM in MJF's contest :) btw I absolutely agree with Chris :)
George   Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 2:53 AM
Lovely Nonet, dear Tahera. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 8:10 PM
Great to see your poem's success Tahera. Congratulations on your worthy poem's successful HM. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 7:19 PM
Congratulations on the Hm win in the contest of Michael, Tahera
Sweetheart Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your HM in Michael's cool contest ... lovely words reflecting the Spring Kiss .. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 3:01 PM
Tahera, Congratulations on your success in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Congrats on your success in my contest my dear..always Michael
Horsman Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 6:51 PM
such a lovely poem, Tahera one can feel this kiss as one reads this. awesome. good luck in contest. Harry
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 1:49 PM
Such a lovely, descriptive nonet, Tahera. May your days be filled with butterfly kisses. Best wishes in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 5:04 PM
Lovely sensual write on spring kiss
Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Take me to this gentle breeze, where the butterflies flutter through the greenery of leaves. Brush my skin with petals of Rose, let me feel your touch, as our loving grows. I love your piece Tahera. Good luck in Michael's contest....:)
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2011 at 1:04 AM
oooh lalalala. LOVE IT!!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 11:23 PM
So sweet and sensuous Tahera my friend.. a vibrant visual for eyes to feast upon to the kiss luv.. good luck in the contest .. happy weekend...
Neels Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 10:32 PM
Tahera I love how you incorporated the kiss and spring in your entry.. Awesome entry for MJF.. Good luck to you ;-) WN
Roberts Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 9:44 PM
just lovely Tahera
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