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Spring Is Under Way

spring is under way
                                         male rain crow sounds cu-ckoo
                                                  female is in sight

                                             under hemlock's leaves
                                      sends sweet response in return
                                                rich bubbling chuckle

Copyright © Bl Devnath | Year Posted 2013

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Skat A Date: 3/20/2014 1:53:00 PM oh yes! I love this imagery. reading haiku, are fun ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/16/2013 7:23:00 AM - We've waited so long, slowly it comes here too. - Beautiful haiku bl. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 5/15/2013 9:24:00 PM Spring is already more than half over where I am. I love this type of weather. You have described it well with your entry. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/15/2013 2:31:00 PM great imagery in this for a spring time poem, BL! Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 5/15/2013 3:26:00 PM Many thanks for your kind visit and for sweet comment. Loved always......,bl

Harry Horsman Date: 5/15/2013 2:03:00 PM extremely visual, lovely imagery Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 5/15/2013 3:26:00 PM A lot of thanks to you, my sweet friend. Loved always....,bl

Carma Sanderson Date: 5/15/2013 12:04:00 PM Fundamental imagery fab ink Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 5/15/2013 3:27:00 PM Nice to meet you. Thanks a lot for visiting to my write and for your valuable comment. Loved always....,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/15/2013 11:38:00 AM Wonderful image wrapped in fine verse! Thank you! Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 5/15/2013 3:28:00 PM Many thanks for your kind visit and for sweet comment. Loved always......,bl