Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

Spring Is In the Air

Here comes a beautiful view,
                   Look like the colors of a rainbow,
                                    Falling in line row by row,
                                                      Red, white, pink, and yellow.


                                           Spring is in the air and everywhere.
                          Trees and flowers here and there,
              Smells so good, smells so sweet,
Birds can’t stop to tweet,


              What a spectacular beauty I see,
                             Flowers like to dance and sway,
                                          Bowing its head from side to side,
                                                         Fragrance filled near the hillside.



Written for Tracie—Indigo Dreamweaver's "Spring Isn In The Air Contest"
My Theme: Spring is in the air
Written: 08/23/2012
By: Maria Paz Samelo
1st Place Winner

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Jack Ellison October 6, 2012 at 8:29 AM A well deserved win, my dear Maria! Congratulations... love Jack

Dustin Self September 6, 2012 at 10:14 PM Congrats on your win!

Kim Merryman September 6, 2012 at 6:11 PM Maria, congrats on your wonderful 1st place win! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2012 at 7:47 PM MARIA, congratulations with your xool poem in Tracie's "SPRING" contest.. always :-) PD

Carol Sunshine Brown September 5, 2012 at 5:31 AM Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Spring In The Air" contest Maria. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit September 3, 2012 at 7:24 PM Congratulations on winning. You deserved to win with this fine entry.

Olusegun Arowolo September 3, 2012 at 4:50 PM Wonderful and awesome piece,Maria.Congratulations on your superb win..

Barbara Gorelick September 3, 2012 at 11:23 AM Like the way you formated it...congrats on your win..BG

Andrea Dietrich September 3, 2012 at 9:58 AM A pleasure to see you are on the winners' list . You did your best and it was a great success! Congratulations. Bukang Liwayway September 3, 2012 at 10:08 AM thanks friend Andrea..this is my very first time to win 1st place in the contest, I'm so happy!!! congratulations too!!!

Joyce Johnson September 3, 2012 at 9:03 AM Congratulations on a delightfully lilting win. Bukang Liwayway September 3, 2012 at 10:09 AM thanks Joyce...Congratulations too. cheers!!!!!

Len Gasun September 3, 2012 at 7:08 AM Congratulations my dear friend on your GRAND WIN!!!! hugs:) leonora Bukang Liwayway September 3, 2012 at 7:12 AM thank you soooooo much my dear friend for all your support...(^______^) mwauh!!!!!!!! hugss!!

Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2012 at 7:50 PM Awesome spring!! I bet this must be for the spring contest. Bukang Liwayway August 26, 2012 at 11:24 PM yes friend Andrea :) win or lose..I did my best..thanks for stopping by...

Sara Kendrick August 26, 2012 at 6:51 AM Ahhh!..Enjoyed this great work..Brings pictures to mind of spring also the marvelous scents that waft upon the breeze ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara Bukang Liwayway August 26, 2012 at 11:25 PM many thanks to you friend Sara...you are one of the great poet in this site :)

Pace Ink-U-Script August 26, 2012 at 6:20 AM I really love this one as well Maria!!! The imagery is captivating....Very creative flow with a lovely layout...hugs!!!

Len Gasun August 23, 2012 at 11:40 PM I love this soooooo much!!!! A very vivid picture of autum giving me a wonderful vicarious experience of the season. Thank you very much for sharing and wish you all the best and luck again in the contest!!!!! Bukang Liwayway August 26, 2012 at 11:26 PM thanks dear friend Nore...(^_^) thanks for your unending support