Andrea Dietrich Poet Kyrielle

Spring Is In the Air

Take off your woolen scarf and coat.
Your hood conceals your pretty hair!
Now chance for snow grows more remote!
Breathe easy. Spring is in the air.

The flu; the cold; let them be gone!
Let flowers decorate your lawn.
Pick some for me, their scent to share.
Breathe easy. Spring is in the air.

For those who’ve slipped on ice or snow,
or - stuck on icy roads - moved slow,
the goddess Eostre heard your prayer!
Breathe easy; spring is in the air.

Throw down your shovel. Say goodbye
to snow ploughs too, for from the sky
comes rain, but mostly skies are fair!
Breathe easy! Spring is in the air.



March 2, 2018

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Marc Acrich April 13, 2018 at 10:25 AM flows so good

Hannah Borke April 8, 2018 at 11:28 AM Hi. As I'm reading it, I know it has to be a win. Sure enough, I see in the comments the congrats

Marc Acrich March 7, 2018 at 3:50 PM It ovious to me that you know how to costruct a.poem The way it should I learned a bit from poe The way he keeps going back to anabell lee And yoy to how yoy mention spring is in the air Sevral times My poems come st you like a freight train not letting people brethe And my gramer and punctuion is awfull with out my ginger app i would be lost i press a button and my app rrads my poem to me it help a lot Maybe you are a twachet tjat is cool Very nice feeling i got very positive poem i could lea Marc Acrich March 7, 2018 at 3:52 PM

Sandra Haight March 7, 2018 at 1:36 PM Nicely written in a very uplifting tone, Andrea! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 6:29 PM Back with congrats, Andrea. Well done.

Carrie Richards March 5, 2018 at 12:34 PM From your poem, I think you may be ready to put away the snow boots !! I don't blame you!!! I'm sure by March, you are well and done with it all. (We only get a few days of light snow each year here.....so actually we kind of enjoy it ) But I am a sunshine girl too !! Congratulations on your poem!!

Joseph May March 5, 2018 at 12:15 PM Lovely write Andrea..Congrats on your win..

Emile Pinet March 5, 2018 at 11:23 AM Congratulations, your poem earned a place in my contest, it was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.

Phyllis Babcock March 5, 2018 at 10:29 AM Please spring come soon as we are getting so much snow. A Colorado high is dumping on us. Flu is running high and colds and coughs are in the air.Want to hang up my coat. Love your write my friend. love phyl

Harriet Shea March 5, 2018 at 2:54 AM Loved your write. Reminds me of when I lived in the snow country. A pure nightmare.. Thank you so much for sharing.. Harriet Shea

Lunita Blanca March 4, 2018 at 8:18 PM Spring arrives when its most needed Andrea.

Vladislav Raven March 4, 2018 at 7:58 PM Hi Andrea, i enjoyed reading this piece. I hope it does well for you in the contest. I love when Spring comes and everything starts to jump into life again. I wish Spring was in the air on this side of the pond. Your poem sings in joy. This one is a fave. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Kudzai Mhangwa March 4, 2018 at 10:15 AM Beautiful piece Andrea! I really enjoy reading your work and this poem felt like a breath of fresh air, sadly I am going into winter time this side.

Jan Allison March 4, 2018 at 10:05 AM Absolutely gorgeous poem Andrea i love the I pact of the repeated line. I expect to see this place well in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

James Horn March 4, 2018 at 7:19 AM Bounce on a spring and will spring into the air like all of the flowers that are springing fourth. By the 4th may have died.

Reason A. Poteet March 3, 2018 at 6:40 PM Great form built around weather changes accompanying spring. Had not heard of the goddess Eostre even though I am partially German. Love repeating lines in any form. Thanks for sharing this, Andrea.

Dale Gregory Cozart March 3, 2018 at 3:25 PM Perfect poem for the contest!

Judith S March 3, 2018 at 2:31 PM Loved this Andrea!! Happy and hopeful that Spring will soon arrive :) We've had little teasers ... but hopefully soon!!! Good luck in the contest!! ~ Judy

Silent One March 3, 2018 at 12:00 PM Not really Spring at the moment, not officially anyway... nor is it looking likelyt to come soon with this weather.. enjoyed your poem Andrea..

Agnes Krampe March 3, 2018 at 8:16 AM Love your take on the prompt with your cheerful poem, Andrea. So sick of cold and ice here.

Arturo Michael March 3, 2018 at 5:39 AM I like the theme of the poem. " Spring is in the air" You can take it from so many angles...Enjoyed it...All the best

Connie Marcum Wong March 3, 2018 at 3:46 AM Excellent Andrea! I know he will love your entry. I wrote a sonnet for it. Your repeating line 'spring is in the air' is what will put this over the top I think. Brilliant! : )

Pashang Salehi March 3, 2018 at 2:10 AM Indeed .... spring is in the air whenever you write a new poem.... Breathe easy...

Viv Wigley March 2, 2018 at 10:24 PM Lovely, Andrea, bright and cheery, full of joy and celebrations. Just what we need. Viv x

Vijay Pandit March 2, 2018 at 7:01 PM Enjoyed reading your poem Andrea..happy spring sentiments..well written as always..best for a win.

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