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Spring is Cold

Spring is cold in its cool pastel colors. Today, Winter’s a fool to tread so late past its season. Its gait freezes flowers. Spring’s upset with the winterly arrogate. Depression will not take hold - the sun’s out. Reminders that March has a lion’s bite. Pinks, whites and yellows - Spring without a doubt is tipping his hat, new leaf growth’s forthright. March does not pack away its clothes, not yet. One day a gal wears shorts, and her sleeves, short. She has her fur-lined coat close by, you bet, and will wait for mid-Spring soak to retort. Brr and brr-ing her sandals back, slap North Face. Primed gal arranges dandelion light. Better than a quilt, the zephyr’s embrace. Parasol of oaks and maples delight.

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Date: 3/20/2024 9:25:00 PM
Nicely done, and so resonant, Kim. Frustration's name is March. ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2024 8:04:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! If the sun is shining that is still a good thing. My American flag was flapping like sheets on a line. God bless!
Date: 3/20/2024 5:00:00 PM
Another interesting and beautiful write from you, KIM. Such overreaching images, so simple to understand and relate to us and our lives.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2024 7:05:00 PM
I appreciate you, Paige xx
Date: 3/20/2024 6:20:00 AM
Your opening lines spell the essence of your poem, my friend: --Spring is cold in its cool pastel colors. Today, Winter’s a fool to tread so late past its season. Its gait freezes flowers---March is proving to be moody as you so well convey, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2024 7:05:00 PM
It sure is…this morning cold…this evening not so much…what to wear…what to wear… Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 3/19/2024 9:17:00 PM
Such a charming poem, Kim. March is one of the finickiest of the months!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/20/2024 5:04:00 AM
It sure is! Thank you, sweet one!
Date: 3/19/2024 6:02:00 PM
How true about March! I find that people get all grumpy because the days are in 70° every day. LOL. it takes a few more months before winter walks away. No matter how old people get there about March. I never understand that, and being in the Midwest, if even worse.. Have to remember that line …March does not packawat its clothes! To stop people from complaining about it all of the time. Illinoi Pangie xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2024 8:33:00 PM
Thank you! So glad you liked that line! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 3/19/2024 4:50:00 PM
A great quatrain, Kim! Nicely rhymed and filled with rich imagery ... A perfect poem to read today, since it is the first day of spring :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2024 5:22:00 PM
Thank you, Kelly! :)
Date: 3/19/2024 4:30:00 PM
such a delightful poem, Kim. I loved the initial line "spring is cold"--definitely caught my attention. Spring has been cold here to...well one day hot, the next day cold and rainy. AARG! I liked "March has a lion's bite" -- fabulous image. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2024 5:23:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! Glad you liked the first line and the bite of the lion. :) Hugs
Date: 3/19/2024 4:14:00 PM
The start of spring is cold :-) Yet, its end is hot i think. Nice poem!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2024 5:23:00 PM
That’s Summer..lol! Just kidding :)
Date: 3/19/2024 12:48:00 PM
- "March has a lion's bite"... and March can smile like a kitten... back and forth/ winter and spring :) - A lovely poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2024 1:01:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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