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Spring In Tokyo

Cherry blossoms cruise Serenely on tranquil pond Koi glide beneath Seeking shade 'neath lily pads Bright parasols on parade Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/22/2011 5:24:00 AM
Lovely pictures you have penned here, Bob! Thank you for commenting on my "Stupid Fly"..For sure you've enjoyed the German beer! I have lived at in those years in Darmstadt which is not far from Frankfurt. Now here in Saxony and very close to the Czech and Polish Border I also enjoy the good Czech beers!! All the best!...Gert
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Date: 2/18/2011 4:22:00 PM
no title Bob, use first lien ---cherry blossoms cruise Thanks so much for the entry! Light & Love
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Date: 2/18/2011 10:12:00 AM
This is just lovely, Robert. I hope she loves it!
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Date: 2/18/2011 9:07:00 AM
This is so very beautiful an image! Thank you for the lift to the beginnig of my day! And thank you for you kind comments.
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:12:00 PM
Good luck in Debbie's contest with this fine work that is a sure winne..rThank you for the kind review of my work....Sara
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:38:00 AM
Great tanka, Bob. Awesome entry. Good luck. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:31:00 AM
What a delightful image of the koe in the pond. You are amazing in all of the forms you tackle. Excellent entry for the contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2011 7:04:00 AM
Magnificent and appealing picture painted Bib and much success in the contest by Debbie.. smell those cherry blossoms from way over here luv..
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Date: 2/17/2011 6:19:00 AM
Thanks for the entry Bob. Soup mail
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:37:00 PM
Oh how beautiful..one of the best Ive ever read...BG
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:22:00 PM
Reading this brings back memories of when I spent the summer of 1963 in my mother's homeland of Okinawa. As usual, this is well written and should get a lot of attention from Debbie. Great job Bob.
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