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Green
Feathers
Rapid wings
Appear in flight
Hummingbirds emerge
Dancing on air
Tiny gems
Vibrant
Prance
2/20/22 Second Place winner Contest: Springtime Ninette Contest Sponsor: M. L. Kiser checked with howmanysyllabes.com: ( 1 2 3 4 5 4 3 2 1)

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Date: 3/3/2022 4:42:00 PM
so sweet, Tania. I love this bird!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/27/2022 7:24:00 PM
Nicely done and the picture really brings it home, loved it, Tania...
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/28/2022 3:42:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/27/2022 8:48:00 AM
Beautifully conceived poem-pic combo, Tania! It fairly sparkles with energy! G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/27/2022 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Gershon!
Date: 2/27/2022 7:02:00 AM
Delightful, exhilarating poem, Tania!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/27/2022 8:39:00 AM
Thank you James!
Date: 2/26/2022 5:03:00 AM
Lovely poem about one of God's marvelous creations! Hummingbirds are a thrill to watch. Great little stress relievers!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/26/2022 3:15:00 PM
Thank you Valerie!
Date: 2/22/2022 9:11:00 AM
They are a beautiful meditation -- who cannot watch, admire with wonder. Thank for the image. Blessings!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/22/2022 6:28:00 PM
Thank you Joe!
Date: 2/20/2022 10:46:00 AM
Fascinating creatures, even when dive-bombing! Aloha!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/20/2022 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Rico and yes they are!
Date: 2/20/2022 9:55:00 AM
PHEW a little beauty and lightness.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/20/2022 10:18:00 AM
Thank you Linda!