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In spring time fresh flowers are rising New lambs in the fields – not surprising In every hedgerow and tree Lush beauty will surround me It’s heaven; there is no disguising 02~16~15 Contest: Spring Forward -Debbie Guzzi Syllables checked 9 9 7 7 9

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Date: 3/21/2016 11:56:00 AM
I choke with so much of your owe from this wonderful piece. You are a gem and blessed talent. Keep it up.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/21/2016 3:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Funom:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/20/2015 7:36:00 AM
Spring as with the other seasons are indeed like Heaven, stunning in their own way also. Lovely Limerick Jan, hugs, James xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/20/2015 8:28:00 AM
I agree James each season is beautiful in its own unique way:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/19/2015 9:26:00 AM
Short, sweet and beautiful, great job
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/19/2015 9:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Gwen:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/18/2015 7:57:00 PM
Wonderful Jan...love it!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/19/2015 4:17:00 AM
Thanks so much David:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2015 11:34:00 PM
I enjoyed the nice rhyming you used with those -ing words, Jan. a Sweet one and picture too.
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Date: 2/18/2015 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2015 2:17:00 PM
This shows that limericks can be just as delightful when lauding nature. You drew me in with this one. gl in the contest Jan. hugs // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2015 2:45:00 PM
..must be about all things coming to life! lol
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2015 2:19:00 PM
Thanks Paul - I have to admit I have penned a badwy one on the subject - didn't think it would be suitable for the contest! lol:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 2/17/2015 11:17:00 AM
Hello Jan. I love SPRING FORWARD. IT IS VERY IMPRESSIVE and I'm star struck. Good PEN. It's a 7!!
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Date: 2/17/2015 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Valerie for your lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/17/2015 11:15:00 AM
a great pen Jan... a 7 from me... lov, nad
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Date: 2/17/2015 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Nad - Spring is just around the corner:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2015 11:04:00 AM
Quite a lovely limerick. I can hardly wait for Spring.
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Date: 2/17/2015 11:13:00 AM
It is on its way here ML:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2015 7:45:00 AM
Very good. You know, I have replied to all of your comments on my poems, but Soup hasn't notified you. I have commented on some of yours too.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2015 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Alice - there has been a glitch that now seems to have been rectified - I do always read the comments people make back to me and sometimes respond back so it has been irritating not to be able to read them recently. i will bob by your poems and see what you have put:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2015 5:38:00 AM
Fresh and uplifting as spring! A seven for sure, dear Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2015 6:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2015 12:26:00 AM
Hmm a limerick for spring...Love
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Date: 2/17/2015 1:21:00 AM
Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 10:43:00 PM
Spring time almost here and this has brought me to it, beautiful poem. 7 Blessings sweet friend eve
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Date: 2/17/2015 1:20:00 AM
Thanks Eve always lovely to see you:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 10:36:00 PM
Nicely done, cute :)
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Date: 2/17/2015 1:20:00 AM
Thanks Ed:-) Hugs jan x
Date: 2/16/2015 9:04:00 PM
Hi Nija Naj you have done well with this limerick, looks nigh on perfect for the competition. You are lucky though I checked with some friends in Italy and the states they are still in full winter mode. Comments seem to have been fixed also as i just reeived an email from the site. Enjoy your spring day, may it cheer your heart. love shane xxx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/17/2015 1:26:00 AM
How is everyone?
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2015 1:20:00 AM
we have just had 3 warm spring days on the trot - yipeeeee:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 8:10:00 PM
Jan this is so precious. This will do well in the contest. 7x7 Janet
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2015 1:19:00 AM
I wrote a naughty one too - i may post it lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 6:45:00 PM
spring is beautiful but I hate the time change..good luck you should do well with this poem
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Date: 2/17/2015 1:18:00 AM
Me too I prefer the change in Autumn - losing the hour throws me totally in Spring:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 6:42:00 PM
Nicely penned Jan...best wishes
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Date: 2/17/2015 1:18:00 AM
Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 6:12:00 PM
Hi Jan, I'm looking forward to the pleasing. This is like a sweet Spring lullaby. Luv SKAT
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Date: 2/17/2015 1:17:00 AM
Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 2/16/2015 6:10:00 PM
Jan you got me with the picture, Good luck, huggs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2015 1:17:00 AM
Thanks Jerry:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 6:10:00 PM
Beautiful flowing limerick....email alerts are back...yay....hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2015 1:17:00 AM
Yipee Tim thanks hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 6:09:00 PM
This is a lovely limerick, Jan! I know you enjoy gardening, and it shows in this poem! :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2015 1:16:00 AM
Our garden is being overhauled and paved - less work for me i simply don't have the energy at the moment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2015 6:06:00 PM
Great Limerick, and a sweet Spring forward poem! Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2015 1:15:00 AM
Thanks Sandra:-) Hugs Jan xx