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In spring time fresh flowers are rising
New lambs in the fields – not surprising
In every hedgerow and tree
Lush beauty will surround me
It’s heaven; there is no disguising

02~16~15
Contest: Spring Forward -Debbie Guzzi
Syllables checked 9 9 7 7 9

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/21/2016 11:56:00 AM

I choke with so much of your owe from this wonderful piece. You are a gem and blessed talent. Keep it up.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/21/2016 3:16:00 PM

Thanks so much Funom:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 2/20/2015 7:36:00 AM

Spring as with the other seasons are indeed like Heaven, stunning in their own way also. Lovely Limerick Jan, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 2/20/2015 8:28:00 AM

I agree James each season is beautiful in its own unique way:-) Hugs Jan xx

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 2/19/2015 9:26:00 AM

Short, sweet and beautiful, great job

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2015 9:33:00 AM

Thanks so much Gwen:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 2/18/2015 7:57:00 PM

Wonderful Jan...love it!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/19/2015 4:17:00 AM

Thanks so much David:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2015 11:34:00 PM

I enjoyed the nice rhyming you used with those -ing words, Jan. a Sweet one and picture too.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/18/2015 6:14:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 2/17/2015 2:17:00 PM

This shows that limericks can be just as delightful when lauding nature. You drew me in with this one. gl in the contest Jan. hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2015 2:45:00 PM

..must be about all things coming to life! lol

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 2:19:00 PM

Thanks Paul - I have to admit I have penned a badwy one on the subject - didn't think it would be suitable for the contest! lol:-) Hugs jan xxx

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 2/17/2015 11:17:00 AM

Hello Jan. I love SPRING FORWARD. IT IS VERY IMPRESSIVE and I'm star struck. Good PEN. It's a 7!!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 11:19:00 AM

Thanks Valerie for your lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xx

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/17/2015 11:15:00 AM

a great pen Jan... a 7 from me... lov, nad

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 11:17:00 AM

Thanks Nad - Spring is just around the corner:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/17/2015 11:04:00 AM

Quite a lovely limerick. I can hardly wait for Spring.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 11:13:00 AM

It is on its way here ML:-) Hugs Jan xx

Julia Ward

Date: 2/17/2015 7:45:00 AM

Very good. You know, I have replied to all of your comments on my poems, but Soup hasn't notified you. I have commented on some of yours too.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 10:28:00 AM

Thanks Alice - there has been a glitch that now seems to have been rectified - I do always read the comments people make back to me and sometimes respond back so it has been irritating not to be able to read them recently. i will bob by your poems and see what you have put:-) Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/17/2015 5:38:00 AM

Fresh and uplifting as spring! A seven for sure, dear Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 6:25:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios:-( Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/17/2015 12:26:00 AM

Hmm a limerick for spring...Love

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 1:21:00 AM

Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 2/16/2015 10:43:00 PM

Spring time almost here and this has brought me to it, beautiful poem. 7 Blessings sweet friend eve

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 1:20:00 AM

Thanks Eve always lovely to see you:-) Hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 2/16/2015 10:36:00 PM

Nicely done, cute :)

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 1:20:00 AM

Thanks Ed:-) Hugs jan x

Shane Cooper

Date: 2/16/2015 9:04:00 PM

Hi Nija Naj you have done well with this limerick, looks nigh on perfect for the competition. You are lucky though I checked with some friends in Italy and the states they are still in full winter mode. Comments seem to have been fixed also as i just reeived an email from the site. Enjoy your spring day, may it cheer your heart. love shane xxx

Shane Cooper
Date: 2/17/2015 1:26:00 AM

How is everyone?

Jan Allison
Date: 2/17/2015 1:20:00 AM

we have just had 3 warm spring days on the trot - yipeeeee:-) Hugs Jan xx