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hyacinth’s in bloom perfume lingers in the air april shower falls Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 5,7,5 Checked with Poetry Soup counter Submitted to Bite size No 13 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier 03/27/21

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Kathy Bahr

Date: 8/4/2021 9:42:00 AM

Nice.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/16/2021 6:51:00 AM

Jan, you have created a stunning, vibrant spring time view of Hyacinths. Congratulations on your win! Take Care, Paulette

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/7/2021 10:37:00 AM

Just lovely Jan. You have created a beautiful spring experience in seventeen syllables. Congratulations on your win. The hyacinth is truly a sure sign of spring! Hyacinth hugs to you :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/6/2021 11:15:00 AM

lovely little haiku with good juxtaposition, jan, i love hyacinths - congrats on your 1st place!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2021 5:16:00 PM

congrats for your awesome win, my friend!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/5/2021 3:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this elegantly lovely haiku, Jan. Best of wishes, Evelyn

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/5/2021 11:51:00 AM

A delightful haiku, Jan! Congrats on your well deserved 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

Date: 4/4/2021 10:26:00 AM

Lovely write Jan, Congrats on your win..

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/4/2021 7:19:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your first place win with your beautiful haiku! hugs

Alkas Poetry

Date: 3/30/2021 1:54:00 PM

April come beauty will show, bloom of beauty in the flower air, perfumed given all around ! salute alkas

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2021 4:32:00 PM

very nice, Jan. There are so many wonderful types of flowers in this world, and this group you showcased cutely.

Warren Doll

Date: 3/29/2021 12:26:00 PM

Jan, I can smell their beautiful, sweet and intoxicating scent. Brilliant imagery and perfect photo. Happy Spring~ Warren

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/28/2021 11:32:00 AM

Fooled me! As Victor noted, phallic symbols have a tendency to wilt!

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/28/2021 6:23:00 AM

They have such a nice scent. Well written Jan. I enjoyed this. :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2021 2:21:00 AM

Hyacinths are among the earliest flowers of spring, Jan, and your haiku describes them perfectly. They do have a very gentle and fresh scent and just look at all the colors! Best wishes for a win, Carolyn