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Spring Fever

from blossoms to bees
nectar drips from swollen lips
kissing the morning

Copyright © 2009 By Caryl S. Muzzey

 6th place In 
 Poetry Soup's Contest
 Spring Fever
 June 2009

Nineth Place Winner ~ "One Of Your Favz-1-8 Lines!!! Old Poem" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Rick Praise
Aug. 1, 2013

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Harry Horsman

Date: 3/3/2016 10:45:00 AM

Hi Caryl, visiting your first post on soup, glad i did, wonderful Haiku

Gawaine Ross

Date: 7/7/2015 6:46:00 AM

Succinct and pretty. Reminds me of one of my own poems.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/6/2015 9:15:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Caryl, well done. Viv x

Honestly J.T.

Date: 6/28/2013 12:09:00 PM

Nicely done

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/25/2013 2:10:00 PM

Well done, Caryl! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Kash Poet

Date: 6/25/2013 11:26:00 AM

Wow!This is great!Congrats on the win.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/25/2013 6:59:00 AM

Caryl I love the second line. A wonderful image. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

John Posey

Date: 6/25/2013 6:12:00 AM

Seems you are no stranger to the winners' circle... This entry shows me why.... Congratulations.... Jake

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2013 11:36:00 PM

A GEM. Congrats, Caryl.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/19/2009 5:18:00 AM

Congratulations Karyl, on your placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. This haiku is outstanding. It's a favorite. Beautiful work. Lovingly, Dane

Elaine George

Date: 10/19/2009 2:42:00 AM

A HAIKU MASTERPIECE! Congratulations on your win Caryl. lainie

Date: 10/15/2009 12:31:00 PM

Caryl, congratulations on placing 6th in the Poetry Soup contest. Enjoy your wonderful honor! Keep up the good writing. Karen

Cesar Cantu

Date: 10/14/2009 2:45:00 PM

True haiku, something truly admirable @.@ congrats!!! thanks for the experience=D

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/14/2009 2:00:00 PM

great one, congrats on the win!!

James Fraser

Date: 10/14/2009 11:23:00 AM

Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/14/2009 3:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Caryl. Love,Carol

Jim Fish

Date: 10/13/2009 10:12:00 PM

><>~ Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><

Lena Pate

Date: 10/13/2009 7:52:00 PM

Cary congratulations on placing in the finals! Well penned Haiku.

P Sheart

Date: 10/13/2009 7:26:00 PM

Hi Caryl Just wanted to wish you congratulations in your 6th place win in the finals! So happy for you. Love Light Truth Patricia

Date: 9/26/2009 4:05:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/24/2009 6:42:00 PM

I thank everyone for their sincere comments. I haven't been around physically or mentally since my mother's resent death. I do appreciate everyones encouragements. Caryl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2009 7:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/1/2009 4:27:00 AM

Congratulations, Caryl, on having your well-written spring poem featured this week. Your haiku is lovely. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J