Spring Fever

from blossoms to bees
nectar drips from swollen lips
kissing the morning

Copyright © 2009 By Caryl S. Muzzey

 6th place In 
 Poetry Soup's Contest
 Spring Fever
 June 2009

Nineth Place Winner ~ "One Of Your Favz-1-8 Lines!!! Old Poem" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Rick Praise
Aug. 1, 2013
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Horsman Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Hi Caryl, visiting your first post on soup, glad i did, wonderful Haiku
Ross Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 6:46 AM
Succinct and pretty. Reminds me of one of my own poems.
Wigley Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 9:15 PM
Lovely haiku, Caryl, well done. Viv x
J.T. Avatar
June 28, 2013 at 12:09 PM
Nicely done
Merryman Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Well done, Caryl! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Poet Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 11:26 AM
Wow!This is great!Congrats on the win.
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 6:59 AM
Caryl I love the second line. A wonderful image. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Posey Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 6:12 AM
Seems you are no stranger to the winners' circle... This entry shows me why.... Congratulations.... Jake
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2013 at 11:36 PM
A GEM. Congrats, Caryl.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations Karyl, on your placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. This haiku is outstanding. It's a favorite. Beautiful work. Lovingly, Dane
George   Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 2:42 AM
A HAIKU MASTERPIECE! Congratulations on your win Caryl. lainie
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October 15, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Caryl, congratulations on placing 6th in the Poetry Soup contest. Enjoy your wonderful honor! Keep up the good writing. Karen
Cantu Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 2:45 PM
True haiku, something truly admirable @.@ congrats!!! thanks for the experience=D
Culverhouse Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 2:00 PM
great one, congrats on the win!!
Fraser Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 11:23 AM
Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James
Brown Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 3:55 AM
Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Caryl. Love,Carol
Fish Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 10:12 PM
><>~ Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><
Pate Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 7:52 PM
Cary congratulations on placing in the finals! Well penned Haiku.
Sheart Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 7:26 PM
Hi Caryl Just wanted to wish you congratulations in your 6th place win in the finals! So happy for you. Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 26, 2009 at 4:05 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Muzzey Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 6:42 PM
I thank everyone for their sincere comments. I haven't been around physically or mentally since my mother's resent death. I do appreciate everyones encouragements. Caryl
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 4:27 AM
Congratulations, Caryl, on having your well-written spring poem featured this week. Your haiku is lovely. Keep writing. Lovingly, DAS-J
Nutter Avatar
September 1, 2009 at 3:12 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. A. W.
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