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Spring Explosion

In a hidden glen
         A fawn stands on trembling legs
             Jay broadcasts the news


 3/29/19

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Alkas Poetry

Date: 4/22/2019 5:02:00 AM

Dear poet, Flowers and perfumes lovely spring walkway, congrats alkas

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2019 2:48:00 PM

Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems!

P.M. Richter

Date: 4/11/2019 3:26:00 PM

I love it ~ great haiku Barbara :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2019 8:41:00 PM

so CUTE!! Congrats on your win.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 4/5/2019 12:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Barbara.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/3/2019 9:45:00 PM

Your canvas pops with life and so well written Haiku, Barbara, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/3/2019 1:51:00 PM

is this Haiku saying that Jay is announcing a fellow hunter? Nicely crafted Haiku in any event

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/4/2019 9:35:00 AM

I meant he was announcing the birth..thanks for stopping by. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2019 12:10:00 PM

- So lovely written, Barbara :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/31/2019 1:36:00 PM

Now that's the kind of news broadcast I like! Nicely done, Barbara. :) gw

Barry Stebbings

Date: 3/30/2019 5:52:00 PM

Brilliant, Barbara, the very essence of Spring. Good luck in the contest. // Barry

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/29/2019 9:36:00 PM

That is one precious, priceless poem.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/30/2019 10:49:00 AM

thank you so much! BG

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/29/2019 9:32:00 PM

Well done, very creative. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/30/2019 10:50:00 AM

thank you CayCay...BG

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/29/2019 1:48:00 PM

don't we quiver with delight when nature announces it's sping time!... lovely work, barbs... huggs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/29/2019 11:13:00 AM

Beautiful image Barbara, good luck. Tom

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/30/2019 10:51:00 AM

thanks Tom, We have deer at the end of our road and just saw a fawn. Spring! BG

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 3/29/2019 11:05:00 AM

Another splendid verse from your very prolific pen, BeeGee! Love it - Bob

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/30/2019 10:51:00 AM

HOpe all is well with you.. Always glad to see your name pop up. BG

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/29/2019 11:03:00 AM

Beautifully penned, Barbara.

Spring Explosion

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