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Spring Explosion

In a hidden glen A fawn stands on trembling legs Jay broadcasts the news 3/29/19

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Date: 4/22/2019 5:02:00 AM
Dear poet, Flowers and perfumes lovely spring walkway, congrats alkas
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Date: 4/12/2019 2:48:00 PM
Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems!
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Date: 4/11/2019 3:26:00 PM
I love it ~ great haiku Barbara :)
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Date: 4/5/2019 8:41:00 PM
so CUTE!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/5/2019 12:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Barbara.
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Date: 4/3/2019 9:45:00 PM
Your canvas pops with life and so well written Haiku, Barbara, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/3/2019 1:51:00 PM
is this Haiku saying that Jay is announcing a fellow hunter? Nicely crafted Haiku in any event
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/4/2019 9:35:00 AM
I meant he was announcing the birth..thanks for stopping by. BG
Date: 4/1/2019 12:10:00 PM
- So lovely written, Barbara :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/31/2019 1:36:00 PM
Now that's the kind of news broadcast I like! Nicely done, Barbara. :) gw
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Date: 3/30/2019 5:52:00 PM
Brilliant, Barbara, the very essence of Spring. Good luck in the contest. // Barry
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Date: 3/29/2019 9:36:00 PM
That is one precious, priceless poem.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/30/2019 10:49:00 AM
thank you so much! BG
Date: 3/29/2019 9:32:00 PM
Well done, very creative. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/30/2019 10:50:00 AM
thank you CayCay...BG
Date: 3/29/2019 1:48:00 PM
don't we quiver with delight when nature announces it's sping time!... lovely work, barbs... huggs
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Date: 3/29/2019 11:13:00 AM
Beautiful image Barbara, good luck. Tom
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/30/2019 10:51:00 AM
thanks Tom, We have deer at the end of our road and just saw a fawn. Spring! BG
Date: 3/29/2019 11:05:00 AM
Another splendid verse from your very prolific pen, BeeGee! Love it - Bob
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/30/2019 10:51:00 AM
HOpe all is well with you.. Always glad to see your name pop up. BG
Date: 3/29/2019 11:03:00 AM
Beautifully penned, Barbara.
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