Spring Explosion

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~ buds and spores bursting - histamines assault en masse ... sinus eruptions. ~ Written and submitted on March 28, 2019 For the "Spring Explosion Haiku" Poetry Contest Maureen McGreavy, Judge & Sponsor.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2019 8:41:00 PM

very clever approach, my friend . Congrats on your win.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/3/2019 11:02:00 PM

Clever piece. Congrats. BG

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/5/2019 5:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Barbara - blessings! :-) <3

Eve Roper

Date: 4/3/2019 9:46:00 PM

Oh, Greg, you just exploded my head with swelling for an allergy pill. Great Haiku and congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/5/2019 5:41:00 PM

LOL - thank you very much, Eve - 'tis that time of year - I'm dreading it! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/3/2019 2:40:00 PM

Hello Grefory R. Barden, a Beautiful written poem of Spring. have a nice day my friend.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/5/2019 5:40:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Darlene! :-) <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/1/2019 11:20:00 PM

So unexpected a write for a SPRING explosion --- but truly quite apropos, … and I believe that I saw your name in the list of first-place trophies as well. Best wishes, Gershon

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/2/2019 1:00:00 PM

You are very kind, my friend, and I'm pleased you enjoyed this one. Blessings, Buddy! :-)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/29/2019 9:38:00 PM

How cute, say I who has never found anything cute about my allergies! That being said, we must laugh about such torture and this certainly did that for me - loved it. Emile went in the same direction and both writes are worth more than a sneezing fit (hope you can tell that's a compliment.) All the best ... CayCay

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/2/2019 1:00:00 PM

Might as well laugh til we cry, Sandra, cuz our eyes will be running soon anyway, lol! Many thanks and blessings to you, My Friend, and I wish you minimal allergic disruptions this spring! :-) <3