Spring Dusting

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Spring Dusting Though many years have flown with time Since we met that lovely Spring day In the dusting of the Springtime Come scented thoughts of yesterday. Doing the annual Spring clean I recall floret adorned trees Alike watching a silver screen I glimpse blossom dance o’er the breeze. Infusing air with sweet perfume Enhancing the start of romance That day was made for love to bloom Our magic began at first glance. My heart soars as high as the moon Whilst I am dusting room by room. *+*+*+* 24th May 2023 In The Dusting Of The Springtime Scented Thoughts Of Yesterday Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/19/2023 8:42:00 PM

Indeed, a very beautiful work. Congratulations!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/19/2023 12:20:00 PM

I thank you graciously for entering my contest. Your springtime poetic apertures have claimed my heart. Congratulations on your win. Be Proud Of Your Successes, Always !

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/26/2023 3:08:00 PM

Uplifting and a joyous way to clean, reminds me of the Disney movie "Enchanted" she makes dresses out of curtains! Perfect sonnet for the contest, Belle.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/25/2023 2:31:00 AM

What a beautiful sonnet which man can resist a pretty girl and a future home maker, they go together like a horse and carriage. Such a cute write. Hope you are well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/25/2023 5:41:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer, all is well and hope it’s the same for you. Hugs and blessings in return, Belle

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/24/2023 12:19:00 PM

Hello Belle, So much to do in Spring cleaning. Although this poem is romantic. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/25/2023 10:32:00 AM

Hello Belle, yes sweet memories of the past helps to make Spring cleaning a pleasure. Rather than a task. I will dear friend You also my dear friend. /Darlene/

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/24/2023 8:22:00 PM

Thank you Darlene, sweet memories of the past help make Spring cleaning a pleasure rather than a task. Enjoy your day too dear friend… Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/24/2023 1:46:00 AM

Spring dusting brings me pain. Only one solution. Hire a carer at least once a fourth night.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/24/2023 2:08:00 AM

I entirely agree, thank you for reading Victor… Belle