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Spring Dreams

How my heart longs for spring with its warm light breezes. To see the wonders of young buds slowly unfurling bringing colour. The promise of new birth all around, baa of new born lambs as they skip through the green lush pastures. Chasing after each other gleefully. The happy songs of birds gathering up wool and twigs to refurbish nests Some already sitting patiently on eggs their mate bringing fat worms and goodies. The longer lighter nights hold promise of the hot summer that is soon to come. Spring flowers adorn woods, fields and hedges and gentle splash of pastel colour fills gardens. Until Spring gently takes over from Winter I will dream on wrapped up in woolly fleece.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/23/2015 7:23:00 AM
In the last line I think you need a comma after "on", otherwise the line is confusing and takes away from this lovely piece.
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Date: 1/15/2015 6:37:00 PM
Yes this is Spring Dreams beautifully captured.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/16/2015 8:13:00 PM
I love spring Maurice march is my birth month ty hugs
Date: 1/13/2015 7:14:00 PM
smiling just around the corner linda white here in ireland beautifully painted as always dear pal wishing you a joyous and happy year
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/16/2015 8:12:00 PM
no snow here yet Liam just cold dark days of rain ty hugs
Date: 1/5/2015 6:57:00 PM
Spring is coming but I would keep the wooly fleece for a while longer!! Loved the peacefulness of the poem -- I of course love the country and the farm! 7
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/6/2015 7:00:00 AM
and the long johns David the older I get the more I feel the cold ty for reading hugs
Date: 1/5/2015 2:01:00 PM
You still don't have my book?? I will send a new one to you. Hoping to see yours soon and just copy the address right from what you wrote on the return address part!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/6/2015 7:01:00 AM
not yet hugs
Date: 1/5/2015 2:00:00 PM
I think you really love spring and I am glad I chose that one to personify!! your contest started and closed out in near record time. Wow! it was amazing, and so is this poem
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/6/2015 6:56:00 AM
Yes I am a Spring baby Yet also I love the start of each Season all so different in their own way. It really flew I was amazed hugs
Date: 1/5/2015 12:16:00 PM
Wrapped up in my fleece today dreaming of the spring to come. You transport me there with your poem.... ahhhh. Love the images that came to life in my mind and heart !! Thank you !!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/6/2015 6:49:00 AM
ty Debra very pleased you enjoyed this poem hugs
Date: 1/5/2015 12:08:00 PM
Your words transported me from this awful cold in Wisconsin to a wonderful warmer place. Great write.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/6/2015 6:49:00 AM
ty Timothy we have had no snow here yet just a few bitter days. hugs
Date: 1/5/2015 12:01:00 PM
what a graceful way to greet the coming spring, shadow.. beautiful.. huggs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/6/2015 6:46:00 AM
ty Nette hugs

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